Absolutely loved it...and BTW many watched it and still hope that it had continued..:')

good i loved it man

Short and sweet!

My absolute facorite one shot!

Lol

Awww:3 so cute plz can you make lemon!

That was very sweet. You need to make the transition from Ayano's point of view to Kazuma's point of view more clear because it was very abrupt. You could type, in bold print, Kazuma's POV, so then the reader does not become confused.

I Was like AWE the whole time lol i liked it !

Aw! I love this! Write more! :D

its cute! aww!

This was really good I'm disappointed in the fact that I didn't read it sooner. Very cute very well done a little ooc for Kazuma since when is he "sheepish". But Ayano's character was well done. Overall though it was really cute. Loved it :)

Awwwwww...That is really very cute...Truthfully I am not even supposed to read stories,but this one reminds me of the awesum moments I spent with my boyfriend before marriege..

though now i am married to him for a year,his love hasnt changed a bit...I am preganent now...the due date of our baby is may 26:):):):):)

(I love kazuma and ayano even though i am a adult and believe mostly everything they show...)

KEEp writing dear,and hope you achieve great goals in your life...

cute, this should be continued just because I would love to know how Kazuma explains himself to Ayano.

Love it!

-Moon-chan

Really awesum! I liked it a lot...I pity Ayano*grin* pooor girl...

Its gud to read this since it is my 4th year anniversary with my BF!

puhleeeeez keep writing..

Nice fluffy one-shot! Personally, I really liked it and you portrayed Ayano and Kazuma pretty well in the such a short scene that doesn't really give all that much time for action so much as just love. Anyways, nice job!