that ending tho...

Just found this...somehow? I missed it-my face is wet with tears-so lovely-thanks.

Eeeeeeeep.

That was the sound of me fangirling over this story.

it is very pretty!

Oh my god, that was awesome! I like how you brought in so many characters and then in the very end... Can't wait for the sequel!

One of the best short pieces on Rumbelle I've read. Absolutely beautiful. Well-written - perfectly well-written - and tender in the best of ways. I also liked all the different points of view. It kept the story moving quickly. I especially loved hearing Belle's point of view. So honest. Truly, truly, Fyrie, this is a work of art. I loved every sentence, every word. Thanks for posting / writing such a high-caliber piece. I always love to find such treasures on this site!

Oh...wow!

I can't believe this doesn't have more reviews. It is a truly splendid piece of writing, excellently in character (especially Emma!), and so very heartbreaking and wonderful all at once. I loved this deeply.

And the ending...such a cliffhanger, and yet so beautiful and lovely. I wish you'd do a sequel or a second chapter, but it is flawless and stunning just as it is either way.

Awesome

I love this version of events and that she comes to remember who they are. Are you planning on a follow-up? It would be interesting, now that Henry also knows who he is.

i just adored the ending line !

Are you going to write another chapter? I'm anxious to find out Rumpelstiltskin's reaction!

Oh, this was absolutely beautiful. You took great, tender care in writing this, and it shows. The story itself was lovely, and it flowed seamlessly. The last line was perfection. I love the vulnerability in Mr. Gold, and I also love that you wrote Belle as fragile after her stay in the psych ward. Realistic and heartwrenching, but so very satisfying.

All in all, wonderful job! I enjoyed every minute. :) Thank you for posting!

-Lullaby-

this is awesome i love the ending.

That was so SO beautiful. It was charming and romantic, and downright perfect in every way. I liked that to made Belle's abuse noticeable- so many authors brush it aside, or don't address it thoroughly. You did a wonderful job with this and I hope to read more from you in the future! :D

Rain

That last line made me grin like crazy, seriously. It was all so amazing in this story, everyone was wonderfuly in-charcters and everything. And Henry, oh Henry was epic. :D