I hate Enyo.

tierdtired
shakeshake
acuesenaccusing
dairydiary
begiingbeginning
tiredtried
attdutedattitude
fushtratedfrustrated
mostmust
a maginedimagine
setsit
colspubicclaustrophobic
whyway
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demanded medemanding I
imoptrainimportant
whosewho's
shakenshaking
swarlshawl?
wantingwanted
molde model
natarlnatural
raftwrath
magzinemagazine
contackcontact
bleechedbleached
moldingmodeling
suddenysuddenly
naslenostrils
diffanlydefinitely
FlureFleur
AphorditeAphrodite
childernchildren
comptterescompetitors
vielvetvelvet
stingsstrings
pedantpendant
straingsstrings
pendentpendant
disignsdesigns
learkinglurking
carefullcareful
neimannemean
thoartthroat
riderid
necklesssnecklace
interdictionintroductions
necklessnecklace
opsoops

And this is one chapter out of twenty four; fairly certain I missed some too. see what I mean about spelling?

god fucking dammit do you even look at what you type? imoprtain? that is supposed to say important, but why the hell would you spell it like that?

Goddammit learn how to fucking spell!

Please tell me you want to bring kratos in this! Man I'mma scream!

Why didn't Harry just use a water-conjuring spell?

*sigh*

One again, he forgets he's a wizard.

*sighs*

If Percy could beat Ares then Harry would beat him as well. Harry seems weak. In canon, wizards could cast for hours without getting tired yet here, with him being a demi-god, he seems exhausted after only a half-hour. Makes no sense. And what's with Harry constantly entering sword fights without using his magic?

I want to see Harry use devastating spells such as Fiendfyre or it's Light-side equivalent, Greek Fire, supremely powerful blasting curses, lightening blasts, storm creation spells (they do exist on Pottermore), piercers, and bone-shattering hexes. He needs to stop relying on stupid Stunners; there is a war going so now is not the time to be a wimp.

Other than those points, this is a good and well though out story, as it's predecessor, "The Order of the Phoenix Kidnaps Annabeth Chase." Well done, my friend. :)

Will Harry gain powers from his mother's domains, such as the ability to conjure food (lol, Hermione would blow a gasket if Harry broke one of the Principal Exceptions to Gamp's Laws of Elemental Transfiguration hehe).

This is a good series you wrote. However I do recommend you to go back through them and fix the errors you may have missed. I noticed that there are some spelling mistake and wrong word usage other than that it was a good story. Keep writing and don't get let some wrongs stop you.

Yay! I'm so glad that there's not just one sequel but multiple! And while your spelling and grammar aren't perfect, this is definitely a marked improvement

Great Story

I will say it right now I think this is a great story. Only problem is grammar and Harry's anger. I dont like a Harry with so much anger.

That god who put a curse on Harry, I think he is Hercules, isn't he? His life had been made hell by Hera, and he was a son of Zeus, not to mention that he was a god. So yeah, I am pretty sure that it was Hercules who put the curse on Harry.

Are you, did you just, did you really- ARE YOU DEAD SERIOUS?! Siriusly? No one goes to jail for beating up a guy! Harry went to jail? Really? If that was so, half of the boys of my school would be in jail, also, Harry is a minor, he can't be put in jail! I skipped that part, really, I couldn't stand it.

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