I know it's pretty mean of me to pop up of no where and ask you to update but will you please update? Its so good and I think it deserves all the attention it can get. I mean look at your stuff! It's absolutely wonderful, well written, good strong plot (assuming you're heading in the same general direction as when you started). One of those fabled rare gems...please update I'd love to see more of your work!

I think you should do another chapter :)

Very pleasant story but that seems to be an odd place to cut the story off, is there more to follow?

I love this so much! I'm trying to sound as polite as possible but MORE...Please.

A little odd, but I liked it. I feel like Hitsugaya is being more than a little greedy here, and a feel like he knows it too. While it may seem kinder to keep her away from others who may have known her from before, how is that fair to the rest of her former friends, or even Karin herself? Keeping her from Ichigo is the worst though. He's been worried sick about her for years and Hitsugaya decides to hide everything from him?

I actually did like the relationship between Hitsu and Karin though. It's a little more low key than most similar fics seeing as Karin seems more mature and less argumentative than normal, but that's not really a bad thing. They seem to mesh better this way.

Later,
Rex

I wish you would continue this, there aren't many really good fanfics of them together after she has died. I loved the fight scene with Renji too. Wonderful job

That bar fight was a great highlight. It seems so plausible. I feel so bad... I ask for a second chapter and then don't read or review it for months . Sorry. I like how their relationship progresses. But isn't she taking a bit too long to go to the academy? I wonder what kind of strenuous tasks and missions Toshiro gave to poor Kioshi. I don't feel bad at all. Good Toshiro. Am I getting annoying saying how much I like your writing? Because I do think it's grat. A question. Have you thought of writing an in-universe HitsuKarin multi-chapter fic?

please please please update?

Great story! This is my favorite shipping!

I really do wish that this story would have been more than just a two-shot. The way it was written you could have made it a longer story. I liked your writing style, and Renji's bar fight was hilarious! A jelaous Hitsugaya, huh? Hmmmm, very interesting, me likie very much . . . ;p

I do hope you develop this into a multi-chapter, because I would certainly love to read more!

Petty and jealous Hitsugaya just about made my day. He is so adorable! As is his venturing into a cosmetics store to buy a present for Karin.

Renji's idea of a distraction is hilariously over-the-top, but it worked out somehow. LOL.

The ending did leave me wanting so much more, like I mentioned, so I would really love for you to write more of this story! )

You right some of the best Hitsukarin fanfics out there! I loved this story, and I can't wait to read more!

I had that same feeling when I wrote "The Plan". I only wanted to write the part with Matsumoto drunk at her table but then it grew and grew like a monster. LOL Anyway, that first scene was so much fun. :) Man, it would be great to see Toushirou pick on him, but maybe I'm just a little mean. Kioshi would deserve it though, so I don't feel so bad. Haha.

What I think I liked best about this entire story was that it held a broader compass of characters and included a few of the repercussions of their secret. Renji was the catalyst of sorts, but his honesty and loyalty were really admirable (even if it went against his friendship with Ichigo). Plus, he's a kind of genius status, isn't he? Not to mention that him and Ikkaku are a three-ring circus all their own.

It was also nice to see HitsuKarin maturing as a couple so them coming into themselves was an interesting development, and it wasn't just together that they grew but as individuals as well. Karin especially seemed like she was becoming more comfortable and while she's not exactly the girl that she was when she was alive, she was still herself, just a different facet to it. And, well, Toushirou? JUust about the sweetest thing ever. Period. (But then, I'm a little biased, aren't I?) D

Thank you for this! While I would love more, ending here makes it feel a little mroe complete so I wouldn't mind it. :)

i swear that that was the best hitsugaya and karin story ever. You are the only person who didnt make him all mushy and weird. Anyway totally awesome

Cute!