Reviews for Bring Down The Sky
Genesis09 chapter 1 . 8/2
I’m gonna keep reading this cause I’m curious but nanobots being able to mess with Kurama? Don’t really like that. Plus it doesn’t make too much sense.
Guest chapter 4 . 7/22
To be honest I don't like the way naruto talks and interacts with other and his personality terrible and doesn't give me any emotion he is just a very boring character and you can do better with it.
tiger9868 chapter 14 . 6/17
please update
dylansandy1993 chapter 14 . 4/25
it's been awhile since this story was updated, but even still, it's adorable and makes me smile without fail.

Would love to see more of this story posted, as good mass effect stories are surprisingly not that common. Many authors get bogged down in technical details or have a difficult time translating a game into a story without copy and paste functions.

I can't think of a single story on NeonZangetzu's account that has the aforementioned issues. Namely, even if the opening scenes are reused, the meat of the story, the content and the delivery are unique. I've read several crossovers with mass effect and this one is a story that jumps around without feeling abrupt, let's the story flow without feeling intermittent and the relationships develop naturally.

At least, if not naturally they are believable. Many other fics tend to fall into the protagonist aura trap of magical relationship development.

Would love more! Yet your Fate stories are equally enjoyable. Honestly, there's little that I dislike on the stories on this account.
Jameslw chapter 14 . 11/12/2019
Great Great story please continue
outcastmike chapter 14 . 10/11/2019
I am looking forward to see this updated again soon. I understand with the whole andromeda thing
koseta.a chapter 12 . 9/18/2019
Wtf you give up on the last couple chapters? There's no details it's all bullet point like sentences. Oh narutos running from jack! Next sentence he's after saten on virmire
koseta.a chapter 2 . 9/18/2019
Eesh that ship names rather erhm...risque? Raunchy? Naughty? Azure Flame... Azure is Not a color for Asari...
creativesm75 chapter 14 . 8/18/2019
fun
NeonZangetsu chapter 2 . 8/5/2019
With luck I can get back to this soon. Sorry for the delay!
fluffybunny chapter 14 . 6/5/2019
i remember reading this back when i was 14, i am incredibly happy that you made new chapters andi cant wait to read more
Nikkless chapter 3 . 4/14/2019
This is shit. would be better if you didint change chakra into biotics.
Nikkless chapter 3 . 4/14/2019
REALLY DISSPOINTED IN THIS FIC. prometheus fic much better
Nikkless chapter 2 . 4/14/2019
ill be dropping this no kyuubi no jutsus just fucking useless naruto
Nikkless chapter 2 . 4/14/2019
so no jutsus fucking boring
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