Eric’s not taking any crap from them.

Cool story so far.

Well, I'm not typically one for romance stories, but that aside, I have one thing to say.
AWWW, that is so freaking cute. I have to say that the darker portrayal of Grimsby was interesting. I used to like his character as a kid, made me laugh, but this feels a little fitting almost, that Grim would be so caught up in what was proper for the prince, he'd forget to consider Eric's happiness.
All in all, very well written and enjoyable.

I read the whole thing, I loved how you used saying from the movie in the story. I loved it! I had to continue reading to know what would happen, it was great/amazing. I can't wait to see if you do more or if you do other Disney Princess movie story fanfictions. Keep up the good work.

loved it.

Did you just create...EVIL GRIMSBY?

Great story! I enjoyed it!

I enjoyed the story very much. It was. Ice to see Eric being the one that Ariel picks; instead of the other man. I detest stories of Ariel dumping Eric for some other guy. However, I think the scene between Eric, Ariel and Triton could have been better. Triton is strict and overprotective but he still has enough sense to give someone a chance to explain themselves (or at least not shoot anyone with his trident). Overall, this story was nicely written and I hope to hear more Ariel/Eric stories from you.

That was such an amazing story, I loved every bit of it! Well done!

This almost made me cry... And I NEVER cry at anything unless it moves me soo much that I cry . This is amazing. You should be very proud xxxxxxxxxxx -alex

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LOVE IT ERMAGERDD ITS AMAZING AHH

P. my fav author

I love it and the twist with grimsby I would rate this 20/10!

This story is absolutely lovely! PLEASE update soon! Thank you for brain birthing this fantastic story into existence!