Thank you for writing this, it is great.

I'm glad to see this story still. ring worked on, and I love your reversions so far! I just reread this whole story, (I'd forgotten so much of it!) and there is a very clear difference between the edited and notthough the story's was good to start with, there were, amx still are things that could be better, but where you have edited is fantastic! Thank you so much for writing and sharing this story with us!$

I straight up choked on my drink when I saw that this updated. This was the fic that got me into D . Gray-Man in the first place, so I'm glad it's still being worked on!

OMG i loved this story, hope you keep updating :)

I thought it was another chapter x)

Wow, time passes so fast! I remember following your story years ago ...I was 14 yo and now i'm 19 o.o

Thank you for still updating this story ! :))

Timeye~

hey, I recently reread your story and I can't help but notice that you wrote "Extending his right hand, he called outCrown B 't it be left hand?

Nice! Hope you update soon :D

I want to first say that I don't normally review. The fact that I am and on the first chapter means that this story is intriguing and well laid out. The plot is developing nicely and is a piece of Art; this is the beginning of a Masterpiece. The opening, with the narration is well executed. Not many authors can pull it off as well as you did. Your use of descriptor words really let's my imagination fall right into the story and I feel like I'm right there with Allan, Ed and all of the others. I am looking forward to reading the rest of this, so far, amazing and breathtaking story you have written. Wonderful job!

Please update - I beg of you. This is an amazing crossover, the plot and characters developing seamlessly. The way you have gone into such depth in regards to Allen's character is just brilliant. Pleeeeeeeeeease! PLEASE! It's been so long.

You're making Allen stupid. Seriously why would he hesitate to tell them about wrath. Did he want more people to be killed? That's just againts his way since he always wants to help people.

Good story. Just not for me. Sorry.

This is getting to be a really good story and I am looking forward to what happens next, especially with the appearance of that bear and the Innocence. Update as soon as you possibly can, please?

Haha haha, im started to laugh at myself, when reading those reviews, that im think to far differently from them. Thinking that the bear is the accommodator who take shifts using innocence. Hahaha, I'll be waiting for some updates.

Nice, new chapter. I really wonder how a bear had that Innocence, is Allen going to be like Cross having two pieces of Innocence, that would be a cool concept.

Damn! So the bear is like General Nine's Monkey. I wonder who it will accommodate? And I wonder if they'll know about Alphonse's blood seal.
Also it's good to see you again! :)

short? are you kidding? 5k isn't short!
anyway, thank you for the update, I understand how you feel about school since I'm having the same problem rn. good luck though