So awesome & hilarious at the same time

:) very neat I like it :)

Gotta say, the story's biggest flaw is the main character. Tried to ignore it in hopes she'd turn out better... but frankly I can't stand her.

I hate how I have such high hopes for Alice and Cedric when I already know Cedric's fate :'(

OMG in lowkey ship Cedric and Alice! 3

Professor Dungeon-Bat? Lord of the Dungeons?

Meh, just call him Sevvie-wevvie-bear!

Good story. You should have a beta edit for you

Loki the dursleys the reason for Alice's parents total character change

Isn't the owl named loki

not gonna lie, im asking myself why im still reading this...probably bc i have nothing else to read currently.i cant help but wonder if you are just ... not good with human interaction and such or if youre doing this on purpose trying to make it funny?(spoiler: its not) i mean the writing generally is not a problem in this story for me, but its a pain to read more than a chapter tbh...

God, i freakin love this fic so much XD.
I LOVE YA ALICE

I loved this story so much! I kind of wished that Dean/Alice happened, because Dean is such an underrated character and he deserves love. He's not written a lot, plus wasn't explored much in the books either so we don't know what his personality is really like. Ah well though. I feel that Harry really needed someone like Alice in his life, because it would have made such a difference!

Anyways, great fanfiction! This is probably my most favorite Harry/OC that I've read, and let me tell ya I've read quite a few. I love OCs so much. ;) I'd write one myself, but I adore using underused characters; though, my next project is a next gen. fanfiction.

This has to be my favorite Harry/OC story I've read. I just adored Alice's character so much! She was quite enjoyable! I'm sad to see this story end but it ended beautifully!

I just found this story and it's so great already. I'm going to take a guess (and I'm sure I'll have my answer one way or another when I keep reading) and say that she's actually the daughter of either Sirius or Regulus Black? Due to her making a point of saying she's not like her parents and that mention of her grey eyes in this chapter (a Sirius black trait), I'm thinking that's where this is going. Random speculation aside, it's a good story so far. I look forward to going on and reading more.