Reviews for Teamwork |
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JackieStarSister chapter 1 . 6/25/2015 It's strange looking back at fanfics written before LOK premiered. Your early interpretations of the characters are surprisingly spot-on! This is really well written too. If you really like quiet moments between characters, you'll probably enjoy my "Mutual Support" series; it's a collection of outtakes to show LOK characters bonding during or between scenes in the show. Again, great job on this piece! |
freebird4 chapter 1 . 4/24/2012 I don't know why, but I thought this was the most ironic as well as one of the most ironic lines. :) "He was allergic to Pabu, but never told his brother." |
TheWonderfulShoe chapter 1 . 4/17/2012 I loved this! Little snapshots like this make the fanfic world go 'round! Well written and just sweet. ;) |
Linariel chapter 1 . 4/15/2012 This was really genuinely sweet and sounds plausiable to me. I like how you handle their relationship as a team. It sounds good to me. I agree I really want to see those special moments between the trio I think that will be one of the main focuses of the story. Family yeah I can see that coming I sure hope it does. Awesome work here. I'm reading your one shots and I can't get enough of them. This has to be one of my favorites so far. |
rezmutt chapter 1 . 4/14/2012 I love little quiet moments too. the interactions between characters allow u to see so much more of them and of life in general i think. excellent writing |
Mashka48 chapter 1 . 4/10/2012 Awwww so sweet! And yes I love these snapshots of domesticity, especially when it's sooo well written. Please please do more! Thanks _ |
Time and Fate chapter 1 . 4/10/2012 Ooooo I like it I like it I like it |
Syd chapter 1 . 4/10/2012 I love the friendship you wrote between them. And I agree with the fact that their relationship will be the most interesting to watch in the show. What we've seen in episode two isn't much yet. |
lazyguy90 chapter 1 . 4/9/2012 Excellent work on this one. And yes, the odd slice of domesticity does provide a nice change of pace. It's a good chance for some fun interplay/character development. I'm really enjoying your LoK work. Keep at it. |
leafysummers chapter 1 . 4/9/2012 Please tell me you're continuing this story! Fantastic job, and the mango thing was cute. ;) |
Tiny Cherie chapter 1 . 4/9/2012 I love how you depict their relationship! (: amazing work as always. |
partner555 chapter 1 . 4/9/2012 This is a wonderful fic. |
Fleur du Feu chapter 1 . 4/9/2012 This is great! |
Reidluver chapter 1 . 4/9/2012 Love it! I agree that I want to see more domestic, fun stuff between the three of them. I also like all your thoughts about their personalities and past experiences. I sure hope we get to see Korra use some waterbending healing! |
sunkissedvampire chapter 1 . 4/9/2012 I love how you write the three of them together, they seem so close :3 |