It's difficult to keep track of the changing POVs in this chapter.

I'm glad Victor considered the chance she could have been taken against her will. I'm afraid I still find Logan had much lesser control over his animal side than Creed does. On the other hand, I like how you have Rhea consider her options not in terms of what she wants, but what she can have as a lesser evil. Sadly, it's realistic.

I think the point you end with is particularly important: it's not that she wants to be with Sabretooth. He's just the lesser evil, for all she knows.

I found it a bit weird that Logan, who has greater control over his animal side, gets so wild over Rhea, when Creed, who indulges his animal side, manages to control himself so well around her. I understand you tried to make the pressure of getting away from Logan keep him in check, but it still felt a bit off. Sorry.

Really impressed with this. You've written it really well and it's not just a straight forward plot line. Hope you update it at some poiMt :)

Good story, I hope you keep writing. I'm curious how this will end, like who Rhea will end up with, I will admit her and Victor are cute together

Very good

This is one of my favorite so waiting for on alert in my email to no avail /3

Completely captivating-can't wait to see where this story goes. Please write more!

i'm totally in Love with this Story *_*
btw i don't like Logan ..
so shhh Kitten go to the Big Bad Cat and be Happy with Victor -

No worries but it's actually supposed to be chere instead of cher because cher is masculine for dear while chere is feminine for dear too. But above all that, I LOVE it!

lol. wow. this game is going to be interesting between victor and Logan on winning the fair rhea's heart. lol. should be fun to watch.

I've really enjoyed this story. You maintain a line between Rhea & Victor that never comes across as rape, to me. Their rough animalistic way of showing their affection, really enforces that they are more animal than human. I could see her curled up on the bed purring for little Nevada, like he was her child. I enjoy this type if story, that embraces the beastly side of us. There a story, Project Oasis, by Allusia16. It is very well written, so as to draw in people who havent seen the film: The Dark Knight Rises. There are similar themes, & I highly enjoy both of your work. Keep on working on this one!

this is amazing! please continue

Great chapter!