amazing

Haha, amusing at the end, but very touching all together.

I liked it a lot.

Keep writing.

-Taylor Tonks

aww nice i love how this was written just loved it

This was beautiful... I loved this...

I love this! And I must say it's the most realistic "if jack survived" fanfiction I've read! I hope there's more to come!

YA ..! THANK GOD THEY DON'T DIE IN THIS ONE. I THINK ITS VERY NICE STORY YOU WROTE. :) :D