please say this is not NaruSaku Fanfic, Sakura in this fanfic is practically as useless as the real sakura from the anime.

It’s hatake Kakashi

Sign another story that just ass wipes Minato with very little care for his mother again. It makes his last name a joke at this point with all the fanfics just going over Minato when he only had 2 jutsu which could be countered really easily if you had any sense.

This could use some work honestly. Misplaced words are abundant, but I cant fault you there, god knows I do it too, but it's in the formatting that bugs me. When you have spots where someone talks to their inner self or bijuu, the whole conversation is in bold, the bijuu talking, the narrative and the dialogue from the outer person.

Lol he just found out about his heritage and already kakashi can “barely” see him moving. Shit fic

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Incredible story my friend! Can't wait for more

Plz ignore my review for chapter three I accidentally put the wrong review

I think you accidentally made a pun in the last few lines of this chapter.

While it's not a very good story, it's still a damn good effort. It shows you have talent and writing ability. Hopefully you'll have a better plot to work with next time.

Lol. Story is hilarious. I wonder if the author meant it to be a comedy?

Maybe the next time team 7 gets caught in the "sunset genjutsu" have a crab from the "illusion" pinch sasuke?

Very wholesome story and nice twists here and there.

The ambush by Hebi-teme was kinda obvious since Sasuke hasn't been able to beat Naruto in a long while.

All in all I'd say 9/10
(minor grammar and spelling errors)

Damn good story

I enjoyed your take on Naruto. I hope you come back to writing that sequel at some point.