Reviews for The Elusive Prince
DalkonCledwin chapter 2 . 7/20
You just lost me as a reader due to the fact that Harry has a scar on his forehead in this fic when the method Lily used to defeat Voldemort should have made it impossible for Voldemort to establish a last minute Horcrux like he did in canon... especially since he never made it past the cottage's front door!
Spazzman29 chapter 13 . 7/20
I know you said this is single pairing but i hope you reconsider as it would be highly unfair for Harry to pick one girl over the other.

I know she hasn't made an appearance in a ehile but why the name Sasha? I have read more than one story with the basilisk with that name (Coincidentally in other stories the Basilisk's name always seems to begin with the letter S).
DalkonCledwin chapter 1 . 7/20
If that truly succeeded in killing Voldemort, then you’ll be in need of a new big bad. However, I can already imagine that role is going to be filled by Dumbledore.

Oh dear me, a veritable Franklin Richards we have here.
Spazzman29 chapter 12 . 7/20
I couldn't care less about Hermione and her pathetic quest of being the best.

I hope this isn't a story where Harry goes on quest after quest and has to beat multiple dark wizards one after another. He's supposed to be a magical titan so technically could stomp on Grindelwald like a bug (After all a man who has rotted in prison for 50 years with no access to magic and is old and decrepit would realistically pose no threat).
Spazzman29 chapter 9 . 7/20
I hope the character tags mean that Harry will get with both girls. I am disappointed that Daphne seems to have been demoted to a minor character.
Yee chapter 13 . 7/19
Hey man please do a pairing with both Fleur and Daphne I can’t he but love both.
TheLastFedaykin chapter 13 . 7/15
I stumbled on to this story and I really enjoy it. Its well written and you have some fascinating avenues to take this story. Keep up the good work!
Jerm069 chapter 13 . 7/13
This is probably one of the better and more interesting stories I have read. Sure there are mistakes in spelling or rather typing but other than that, it is really well put together as well as not rehashing the same drivel over and over again. Well done!
thunderofdeath97 chapter 6 . 7/12
not a fan of fleur training under flamel, also i think harry is to weak
thunderofdeath97 chapter 3 . 7/12
harry is only 11
Seananagan chapter 13 . 7/11
I am thoroughly enjoying this story so far! Anyone complaining about him being OP is pretty ridiculous, that was obviously going to happen from the very beginning so I am not sure what they were expecting or why they are even reading this story? I hope to see more soon and if what it seems you are leading towards with a Harry/Daphne/Fleur pairing is the case I am super excited since they're my two favorites for him to be with and both at the same time is even better. (I don't really care for them being paired with other characters as weird as that is).

Thanks for sharing!
AadenHelan chapter 13 . 7/9
hope you will continue this soon
BBryant chapter 1 . 7/7
Harry is insanely overpowered in this story. What plot could there possibly be besides smut?
stylo1 chapter 1 . 7/7
snape wondering if harry apparated inside hogwarts.
snake tears? snakes do not cry, they dont not even blink as hey have no eyelids
stylo1 chapter 1 . 7/7
where is sirius?
why is mcgonnagall grading summer work in november (after halloween)
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