Do hope that you come back to this someday.
I know it’s been a while, but that last chapter was quite a cliffhanger to leave it on.
Really enjoyed reading this. The dynamic between the two was not one that I had read before, and I’m keen to see how the rest unfolds.

Was most looking forward to them revealing their relationship to the group and seeing their reaction, so I’d love to read the next chapter.

Great work so far.
Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

This is great man.
Update soon please

So where the hell Harry's determination went out of the window spending his summer only enjoying no training and all wow man pathetic writing

So, what we're supposed to get from this chapter is that; Blood Purists are completely right when they say that Veelas are Dark Creatures.
I mean, if they can just take control over someone like that and they are completely willing to abuse that ability even against someone who saved their 8 year old daughter, I don't see how you, the author, still can continue defending them through Harry's words and actions. You're the one who basically turned them into manipulative sluts who don't care about anyone but themselves but then you go and make Harry love them all of a sudden for no reason other than the fact that they are beautiful.

I don't know man, I just can't even begin to understand what you were thinking while you were writing this chapter. The whole thing just makes no sense whatsoever. I mean, there are just so many problems with this chapter and the veelas in it that I'm not even gonna start listing them because it would take me 2 hours to do so...

Oh fuck off.
Stopped at chap 6 once he started getting assfucked by the veela. If he’s going to take getting blackmailed into shit like that lying down and then comforting the blackmailers then fuck this

I'm outta here, you said no Soul Bond yet that is essentially what you've done. Life Debt forms but instead of it forcing Fleur or any other Veela to marry Harry or die it is instead the other way around with consequences towards Harry, same things with very little differences.

Shame too, I thought this would've been a good fic with a somewhat realistic relationship. Nothing conveniently bringing them together, nothing having them snog within the first Chapter they meet each other, speeches about not knowing love after having met them, ooft.

No idea how happy I am to see this isnt a Soul Bond Fic or anything like that.

This has been very good so far, have the feeling it is all going to go downhill from here though. Please don't let this be a stupid Life Debt forces marriage or die fic, absolute stupidity. Not one of them are worth a read. No character interaction or progression in em, just straight up into a marriage/relationship and life stories are exchanged. Perfect!

Too bad you quit here, this was quite an interesting start to the story. In fact, I rather enjoyed that you made the Veela powerful like this, rather than the usual damsels-in-distress. And Fleur wanting to keep things equal despite the advantage given to her only makes things better... truly, this story deserved a longer life.

Also, ignore all the pretentious people trying to tell you how to write your story. They clearly don't know what they are talking about.

Wow. This is a really great story! I'm curious as to what made you stop writing it, as it is very well written!
I'm going to follow it, on the off chance you decide to come back to it after the 5 year break,because it really is that good!

Shame it hasn't been updated in donkey years, was liking the plot developments.

Are you going to continue the story?

I am SIRIUS ly looking forward to the next chapter - Please could you update ASAP.

Thanks in advance.

-Mark

That cliffy!