(They continue to walk through the woodland, through rain, until they reach the top of the hills. Snow covers the ground. Strider pauses looking around. He looks back at the hobbits who are getting out frying pans and cooking utensils)
Strider: Gentlemen! We do not stop 'til nightfall
Pippin: What about breakfast?
Strider: (Looks confused) You've already had it.
Pippin: We've had one yes. What about second breakfast?
(Strider frowns and walks off)
Merry: Don't think he knows about second breakfast Pippin (He puts his bag back on his shoulder)
Pippin: What about elevenses? Luncheon, Afternoon Tea, Dinner? Supper! He knows about them, doesn't he?
Merry: I wouldn't count on it
(An apple flies over a bush and Merry catches it. He gives it to Pippin, pats him on the shoulder and goes to follow Strider. Another apple flies through the air and hits Pippin on the head.
Merry: Pippin!

You need to fix the spelling and grammar errors in this chapter.

Dr. Leonard “Bones” McCoy: I'm a doctor, not a bricklayer.
Captain James “Jim” Tiberius Kirk: You're a healer, there's a patient. That's an order.

It’s like with the cipher rattling all around in her head it makes her think that she’s a Prothean!

HAH! Ship cancer bad, All Star Pilot good! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

I just learned through interacting with EDI that Cerberus actually jumpstarted the development of the original Normandy! That explains how they were able to rebuild it bigger and better than ever!

It’s too bad we never find out what happened to Talitha after “I remember me”.

CC-1138 “Boss”: Shotguns?! I didn't think anyone used projectile weapons anymore.

Dancing on her grave? Talk about putting the fun in funeral.

Mmmmm...candy...(starts drooling like Homer Simpson)

When I hear Lazarus I can’t help but think of the Lazarus Pit but apparently it’s a reference to Lazarus of Bethany, who in the Bible was restored to life by Jesus Christ, four days after his death.

(Fish Out of Water says what he translated from the alien child)
Chicken Little: His name is Kirby?
Abby: They left him behind?!
Runt: DARTH VADER'S LUKE'S FATHER?!
(Chicken Little and Abby stare at him with a "Really?" look on their face)

I really love your characterization of Grunt in this chapter!

I wonder how old Samara is exactly.

Chief Brody: You're gonna need a bigger boat.