Excellent story. I wish you had continued it. This was very well done.

Please update this really great story;)

Pleaseeeee continue I beg of you!

Awwww!

It was a cute story with an actually good plot. I’ve never seen others go this route, and I have to say it was a good one. The characters where a bit one demential with little development, but it ran smoothly despite those holes. Good job and great story.

great story ... loved it

enjoying.

Aww that sucks I loved it

My heart breaks for Hyde, what a crap deal he got with Bud and Edna. He was so lucky to have the Forman's and Jackie. And I adore Jackie being a Forman. You combine the best of both worlds in creating a Jackie Forman. Her best features and none of her annoying traits. I love how worried Jackie is about Hyde. she doesn't push or shriek. she holds him and gently twists his arm until she gets her way;)

It's nice to see Eric in the protective brother mode. Definitely not something you're used to, but also, let Jackie and Hyde love each other, man! I do enjoy the secret lovin' though much hotter that way.

Oh Hyde! Love that insecure adorable guy.

I liked it! Hyde admitted he had feelings for Jackie, they weren't just messing around and I felt the feels, plus I could totally picture Red glaring at Eric and softening up for Jackie, his pumpkin. Too funny.

Yes! Love it and can't wait to read more. Love the spin on Jackie as the fifth Forman. Of course she's the favorite kid, she's perfect in the family.

Awesome story sad its over but glad you gave it a sweet ending

Can u continue this?