Even though I'm like super late I just wanna say that the story's great but I think ur writing angle instead of angel lol

His vindictiveness towards Katniss is a little extreme, and the rules for tributes are far stricter than that.

How about Petra and cato adopt a child...

Love it so cute

Omg wat!? This was so funny! The OC the Personalities Gosh! Hope to read you soon bye

Umm this fanfic makes katniss seem like a bitch

Okay it was good but it's a little weird how you turned Katniss around. I can deal with Peeta being against her, but you kind of milked the whole I-hate-Katniss thing, and you don't really do explaining behind the radical things, like Ray stopping the hunger games abruptly. I do think that you're a good writer, though. Final bad point: An angel is a spirit. An angle is a mathematical representation of two lines that intersect, and the proximity to parallel-ness that they present. ANGEL is spelled A-N-G-E-L. Angle is A-N-G-L-E. Sorry, just indulging a bit of spelling-nazi.

Peeta is way to blasé. As if he'd forget the day of the reaping.

That's um...ok um...I don't really know

I can tell u dont like katniss

This story really REALLYsucked...

loves it

This was real eye opening for me. And not in a good way. AT ALL.

i love your story!

I actually really enjoyed that. However, that being said, it seemed like everything was really rushed. You went from them almost dying to happily ever after in what felt like three paragraphs. It seems like you definitely could have stretched this out a lot more. But definitely a good job.