I have only read this first chapter now but I am excited for the next 8 chapters and then I just remembered this was cancelled huhu. Nevertheless, if this was still active, I would have appreciated a omake or one-shot on the repercussions of his death (like I can't just imagine Kakashi's reaction given his technique was used to kill his sensei's kid, Jiriaya and his regrets, Sakura on her unending love for Sasuke given he killed a teammate even if she and Naruto are not that super close yet, the Rookie nine's Shock even if some of them haven't had the budding friendship with Naruto - Hinata's admiration, Kiba, Choji and Shikamaru who sometimes hang out with Naruto, even Itachi on how to justify his brothers' madness. I think it's hard to just see how the Konoha people will view that given they love the "last loyal" Uchiha and how they hate the Kyuubi even Danzo who at his militarized view will see the Kyuubi power access at lost. Nevermind how the Akatsuki will do now and if Tsunade goes back to Konoha or joins Orochimaru. Anyway, the death affects the whole line and I guess it's just hard to imagine the devastation it brings to Naruto's first world. I did like how you made this fic where he is reborn into it rather than having some sort if suitor ehere the two plots are at the same world just inconveniently at large distances.

would love to see this continued. youve done a pretty good job so far, and i would love to see where you take it.

So is Brock and misty going to join right and we are going to kanto to all of the regions right.

Please continue soon it was good

I'd really like to read more of this story it honestly sounds very interesting so far and I would really like to see just what you have planned next so please keep this up and please decide to update again soon.

Please continue the story.

nope, the way you wrote that battle ruined it for me. im done

Team Rocket is without one of the biggest pain in butt duo (or trio depending on if you count Meowth) I've ever seen in anime. This is my personal opinion but they also make to be some of the worst "antagonist" I've even seen. Seriously they might as well turn a new leaf and join the good guys.

Huh. Based on the fact that you mentioned Naruto liked Electric type pokemon (at least I'm pretty sure you did) will the little Eevee evolve into a Jolteon?

I really like this. Please don't let it die.

... any hope of more chapters? at all?

I wanna read more so bad! its so good!

Story link?

Ch 4

That little reminds me something. I had seen that episode and thought something but now actually to see the thoughts confirms my suspicions and little HTTYD style.

Will this be updated/adopted/rewritten/posted elsewhere? It's a very good story and the idea of Naruto and Kurama taking on the world of our beloved (20 years old) pocket monsters is fabulous.