I have never read a character that I personally wanted to destroy more than Brandon.

I love your story so far! I wanted to say that I'm glad you stood up for yourself as others would just stop writing because of all the abuse :( your a great writer and honestly the people who write hate comments are pathetic and can go hate on someone who cares. Keep up the great job 3

This was such an incredible story!

That meany I love your story.

Good story! I liked it!

I don't know what's with all those insulting reviews, but the things I can say are:
1. awesome story
2. not so bad for a story when you're 19 years old
3. THOSE BAD REVIEWERS CAN'T EVEN SEE A GOOD STORY WHEN IT'S RIGHT IN FRONT OF THEM
4. awesome! English mastered! :)

You are amazing I love your story and how you stood up to a mean reviewer

I honestly think haters are bitches two so I just ignore them because just because there ignorance has gotten the best of them it's not gonna bother me sure it pisses me off but whatever ps I love this story and your writing oh and I know that this is a late review for this chapter but I just found and started reading this yesterday so yeah hahaha anyways catch you later.

-lovable52 3 keep loving.

I don't know who these bitches are that are saying you are a horrible writer and all, but i personally LOVE your story! Don't let the hate get to you!

To that 'guest' you stupid, you asshole, you get outa here
P.s. I don't really talk like that in real life and sorry for the language if you read this but to the 'guest' I ain't sorry for sayin that

All these haters that are talking shit are just stupid and are just fucking Jealous that they can't wright something as good as this and don't have a good imagination so sweetheart just ignore the fucking haters

-Fuck Haters

That was one of the best stories about. Kickin it that ive read on this sight u should be proud of ur self for being a good writer and i would love to read more of ur stories :)

Your story was amazing! Please keep writing!

That guest is wrong he or she is a ******* to post that this is sooo worth the time to read don't be discourage alto of us have faith in you
You're awesome don't forget that

I've been reading your story for the pass few days. I love this particular story very much. I like how you make jack so caring towards kim. And some how slowly their developing a stronger emotional bond. Keep up the good work, I really do enjoy reading this jack & kim fanfiction -