this was kinda awesome

umm...okay.

I love it!

Well done *Claps*

Interesting and question is pein part of her mind?

That's so.. Oh my god. I can't say anything

...Am I right in thinking Pein is a figment of her imagination? Because that's really dark... Love dark psychological fics.

I don't know what to say... I mean I liked it :D but its sad :l

love it!

it was good. dark but good

This is a good one-shot. It leaves the details up to the imagination.

Really good!

Beyond words, I am blown away and delighted.

Thank you so much for this story suited to me own sort of writing style. I liked how bitter sweet it turned out and how much of it was left up for the reader's interpretation. I think Sakura, though imprisoned within her mind and the facility, led a happy life along with Pein. When it comes down to it, all you need it love, and she has that. This made me so happy to read, thank you for this piece of work!

It's kind of ironic how Pein is the one to help her, especially since his name can be interpreted as literal pain. I imagine Pein in my head but the way you use his name in repetition during some parts makes me think of the figurative meaning of pain, so bravo! I feel like this really adds to the effects of Sakura's unstable mind.

I really like how you put Sakura's statistics in the beginning and ending, it was chilling to see that she was pronounced deranged and unable to leave the facility in the end. It's a bittersweet ending. Sad for obvious reasons, but happy because I suppose now she'll be able to stay with Pein.

Omg I was like balling by the end of this and I don't even know if they're happy tears or sad tears. Oh gosh, that story was amazing. Dark, twisted, but incredibly amazing. Great job and keep it up!