Reviews for Bittersweet Memories
LimJJ chapter 1 . 11/10/2016
nicuh!
mashiro.x.shiina chapter 1 . 7/19/2014
The end was soooo cute- Ah!:)
johncahill chapter 1 . 4/20/2014
Great story. Hope you continue writing
waldo071 chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
An emotional roller coaster. And I am still feeling the after effects. It was that amazing. Some very little and very ignore-able grammatical/spelling errors, but which fic hasn't?

Anywho, a sequel will be very desirable indeed. Although it is most advisable that you refrain from covering the aspects covered in this fic in the sequel or next chapters. Too many times I have seen it done before. Author writes good story a oneshot, receives requests to continue and basically wounds up repeating the same topics in the updates. -_- You have already covered Sakura's emotional growth in this one, please don't go over it again. It has been written on so exclusively here that it requires no further exploration. You should go for fluff. Everybody loves fluff :P

This solution coincidentally (or intentionally) answers one of my biggest objections against traditional approaches to storytelling. That being depriving the audience from a satisfying amount of the end product. You write the whole story towards a happy ending and then BAM! it really is an ending. I mean come on, give us equal parts happiness and angst.

I feel that now I am incessantly rambling...so... really amazing, good job. And yes please, for the sequel.
silveroaks chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
Great job!
your story was very well written.
being a sucker for this paring, i would love to see it turned into a multi chaptered story. i think you'll be able to nail it, so good luck! XD
happy everyday life chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
YES YOUR AWESOME STORY MUST HAVE A SEQUEL! A MULTI CHAPTERED FANFICTION! This story was sweeeeeeeeeeet!
Suhara malik chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
Hmmm. .touchy story. .its gud. .bt u should write somthng more gloomy tht bring tears to readers u knw. .anyway. .i liked it. .nd i love narusaku. .
DragoNik chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
A perfect hurt-to-comfort story if I say so myself :) Congrats on an amazing story :D
nacho-chan chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
GAAAAAHHHHHH I LOVED IT ;-;

When you said you wanted me to read this, I truthfully wasn't sure how good it would be because before people have been like "Can you read my story?" or "Can you help me write a story?" and they haven't been that good... D: But I loved this story like so much like you don't even know like aksnfdsjfnaksjhf

But ANYWAYS, I like your style and how, with this one, you kept repeating that "It was days like these, in which I felt _". Those gave it a cool effect. :D

And then, remember how you said it was hard to make you cry but I did with my story? Well, I cry like SO easy when I'm sad, but I've like never cried out of happiness, but guess what? xD Your story made me happy cry, of course! Like, part way through when Naruto was comforting her and she was so happy, tears were just welling up in my eyes. :')

So, yeah, KEEP ON WRITING!
honluver13 chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
I loved it :)

U don't need to add anymore chapters because I loved the ending.

It was really cute how Naruto is romantic. I honestly see this happening in the show. Good job :)
AiKizuna chapter 1 . 4/27/2012
I...loved itttt! I'll subscribe to it just in case you decide to continue it. (:
animefan5 chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
that was an awesome one shot you should make a full story
Kisumido chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
-wipes tears- That..was so...BEAUTIFUL! You make me want to go into a depression and then a beautiful man will come and make me feel better :D This was amazing, you deserve more reviews for this! .
Don-kun chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
Dam that story was really good thank you for the good read.
Dara-San chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
Super! Plz continue!
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