XD so epic, just love

Lmao.

I felt(arched eyebrow) . . . amused

Ok, I am going to give you a break on grammar and puntcuation here since you did say you didn't have time to edit.

That said, This story works and doesn't work on two levels. As a "One piece in a saw sitation" it works perfectly. Luffy and Zoro are perfectly in character. Their reactions were natural, while the jokes hit home perfectly.

On the other hand, it seems like Jigsaw was played by a copycat. He lacked anything that told me he was Jigsaw. Heck, I was expecting the real Jigsaw to come out and witch slap the guy fopr using his name. I think that kind of hurts thi parody of the Saw films. It oesn't detract form the story, just makes me shake my head.

But stil, the jokes were great and the humor was excellent

First off, I'm glad you got a good grade on your essay. Doing something you like, for instance writing fanfiction, is a good way to distress and enhance creativity. You may have procrastinated, but by writing this you actually helped yourself in getting a good grade on your essay. Give yourself a pat on the back :)
As for your story, it was great! I believe that Jigsaw WOULD get frustrated with Luffy and Zoro! I was very surprised that Jigsaw didn't just let them go out of sheer frustration! Great job! Give yourself another pat on the back :)

FUN! I read the Luffy and Zoro parts in their voices :-P

Oh my gosh, I almost peed myself reading this! You got luffy's and zoro's characters perfectly; the entire thing was just fantastic! Keep up the awesomeness!

This is pretty funny. Great fic.

Lol YOU don goofed jigsaw you don goofed

Rofl! This was golden XD great stuff

Great story :) Poor Jigsaw haha

hahahaha, lol

I wish this happened!

This was hilarious! XD

loL XD i love how they get misunderestimated.

asdfgh THIS WAS BEYOND EPIC AND AMUSING
Jigsaw really didn't know what he was getting himself into xD
heheh... Mystery gas