That was a great one shot aaand I am tuned for a sequel!

wow, this is awesome, reading this kind of stuff for years never saw like urs, keep it going , pls pls pls make more ! :)

That was outstanding like hell I was on the edge odd my seat for the whole damn thing this rocks please update soon can't wait to wat happens next .

Oh! A sequel would be marvelous! That one was kinda a cliffhanger... I love the angstyness! I'm not, like, a sadist or something, but it seems very poetic at times. Keep up the good work!
-SR4

Wow. This was really, really, really amazing. You are really talented!

Oh my... Mako! Korra!

FINALLY a mature Makorra story that doesn't include lemons! Hahaha! (I prefer dark themes & torture over smut any day.)

But seriously, this was intense. Poor, poor Mako (and Korra), having to go through that horrible torture ... I wonder what's going to happen in the sequel. That is, if you even plan on posting it, which I think you SHOULD. Great story. :)

Hold on a sec. *wipes tears away* That was very moving...

Hi, there!

I really love this story- it's so emotional and it portrays a great dark side to LoK that a lot of writers ignore. It makes the situations they're in seem more realistic! If you have the time, I would love it if you checked out my LoK story- your opinion would mean a lot

Best wishes for your writing endeavors!
ishibby

It feels wrong to give cheerful praise for such a dark story; but this is really well-written, and emotional, and real. It definitely calls for a sequel, though, especially since Mako is still unconscious at the end; I at least wanted him and Korra to make eye contact and say something mutual. Good job on this.

When are you going to upload Aftershock?

Well, now that I no longer have any feels left...

As awful as that was, it was also brilliant.
Well done!

please please please put up the sequel VERY VERY soon. i loved this in a creepy but entertainingly sad way. You are a very good writer and ill be checking every day for "Aftershock" hopefully i won't have to wait too much longer!

This is amazing!
I totally wanna see the sequal :D

Screaming. My mom thought I was watching a horror movie. I MIGHT AS WELL HAVE BEEN. Good lord, wo/man, get on that sequel! I need my fluffyangsty bandage!