Neville Snape XD

Neville Longbottom and Severus Snape? Are you out of your mind!? How the hell...did you come up with the weirdest pairing I like?

Quite well written but EEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! I'm sorry that is probably the weirdest ship known to mankind!
But still you write exceptionally well!

Omg lol I loved that!

oh for the love of little furry kittens

Falls off chair Laughing.

Fantastic

EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! NEVILLE AND SNAPE? SERIOUSLY?/

I'm sorry. But really? SNAPE? and NEVILLE?

Weird...just weird... But very well written ( no sarcasm )

Haha, I really didn't expect the ending to be like that. Quite a read. I don't usually ship Snape/Neville (oh wait, I never did) but this just made me laughed. Very good story.

LOL! The ending was hilarious! I actually KNEW what was going to happen the moment Harry first looked at Snape before putting his bet down. Still, it was still funny when you made it happen. Great job!

Okay, when you kept mentioning Snape, I saw that coming, but not at first. While I am a Neville/Luna fan through and through, this was REALLY funny. I love how Harry REALLY does NOT want to go to his reunion. Adorable!

I'm sorry, but I can't get over my "EWWWW" reaction upon finding out Snape & Neville are together...though I am glad that you made Nev "hunky" in this! I really got a kick out of Harry's reunion letters, however, and his reaction being nearly exactly like Vernon's! From Ginny's reaction, I get the feeling that Harry's ignored letters (& had the thousands of letters streaming in) before?

"Give the Threshal..." [Thestral? I assume you were referring to the invisible flying 'horses'?]

I actually really love ur writting style and I think ur great with words. But to be honest I don't really like the story line because I think it was a little too far fetched from the real HP, n I'm all about rowlings story! *heart*, so neville and snape doesn't work for me and Harry being so selfish doesn't either. lol but I can see ur a great writer so pleaase:

KEEP WRITTING! :D

Love,

A.S :)

Haha, good for entertainment value. I loved how it started off, with the letter scene being an amusing parody of the original book, and the overall plot twist made me smile. Just a few spelling mistakes, e.g. Thestral, which could easily be avoided by spellchecking and proof-reading your work, but otherwise a funny, fluffy ficlet.

Also, if you enjoy writing Harry Potter fan fiction, you might be interested in online roleplay sites based on JK's books. I write at one called Rocky Mountain International. It's good fun and an excellent outlet for creativity. Plus our community is very friendly and I'm sure you'll find it enjoyable. If you have a chance, check out the link on my profile or Google RMI magic. We'd love to have a writer like yourself on board.

xx wingedthing xx

Oh lovey, I wish I could favorite this ten times over. ~3