Reviews for Journey of a Master |
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Hz chapter 4 . 2/14 Wonderful would love to see some more great little story you've got going on here |
Fires of Eden Red Rose Aurora chapter 4 . 1/15/2019 Aww, I am sad to get to the end. I can't see anything wrong with your writing, and after you have covered the training, you don't need to describe it again, unless it changes. I know it has been some years, but please consider continuing |
Syren Nolbuluuki chapter 4 . 10/26/2018 I LOVE THISSSSSSS! |
MagmiaFlare chapter 4 . 10/10/2018 This is a great story. I really hope that you continue. |
jurassicdinodrew chapter 1 . 10/10/2018 It's wonderful that Ash saved the cute little baby Mew like that, and i got a feeling Mew has found herself a new daddy out of Ash, I always love a Pokemon story that Ash has Mew as one of his Pokemon, good luck. |
Tilty.bbb chapter 4 . 8/26/2018 This was a fantastic read well done |
FFdotNET chapter 1 . 6/27/2018 This is to the review two under my own: In HG/SS, Sentret is in route 1, right outside of Pallet Town. Before criticizing, do your research. |
Guest chapter 4 . 6/12/2018 He should have Bulbasaur and Charmander from seasons 1-5 |
Hikaru the Moth chapter 3 . 4/11/2018 I just noticed this. In the first chapter, a Sentret leads Ash to the berries. Sentret isn't introduced to Pokemon until HG/SS, in the Johto region. PLOT HOLE, M80 |
Haydoge chapter 1 . 11/10/2017 I hate pikachu |
scorpin17 chapter 4 . 9/2/2017 love it |
Latias 213 chapter 4 . 8/8/2017 Osum |
fairie68 chapter 4 . 3/6/2017 anyone else wonder if he's missing or dead |
Emperor-Aurora chapter 1 . 1/12/2017 That's asinine even for fanfiction, as a Legendary and one of the oldest Pokemon around I HIGHLY doubt a poisonous berry will bring her life to an end at ANY point. Christ man get a grip. |
bladetri chapter 4 . 11/8/2016 like XD |