The SEAGULL reminded me of CHARLIE SEAGAR lol

Don't you give someone the talk when there like 11, ya know like school does

I loved this! So cute

I really love every emotion shown in this FFn, Mikau-san. It makes me crying, especially in the last omake. The first chapter is already filled with so much sadness, but reading the story in Kito's point of view is sadder. When I read the first chapter, I never guess that at the same time, Kaito was feeling so lonely and confused with his own feeling. You're really good in showing those emotions with your description and plot. Well, the omake is really good, too. I like the part when Kaito became nervous and endded up break down and told Saguru that he doesn't need all the luxury things, he just need Saguru's love. Then, come the part when Kid finally revealed his identity. The last sentences Kid said are so sad that I was crying. I really imagine that he will die while putting rest his father's remaining existence with the dead lf Kid. It's a realky sweet but heart-breaking moments. Mikau-san, I'm so so sorry to say this, but I think Kaito is too emotional and ... with him keep saying something related to sex, it makes him looks so pervert and it is as if the more important thing is sex, not love. I know that you've made it clear that sex is not as important as love, but still ... Kaito keeps saying about sex and ... yeah, I'm sorry ... I thought you would write their making love's scene, but it's still im rte T, so ... I'm sorry, but it's just my opinion. It's okay if you want to ignore it since it's your story, not mine. I still love the whole story, that's why I'm here giving you a review :) Btw, I like the explanation of 'sin' part, lol. It reminds me of what my lecturer said about buddhist in Japan :)

Your story is really good, Mikau-san. You're really good in showing the emotion of the characters in every of your stories. So, keep up tge good work and keep writing! Sorry for my rude words *bow*

This was so cute and awesome i cant even adsjfkl ;w;

Heeey. x3
I just wanted to thank you for that really wonderful story, you wrote.
I'm reading it again and again and again, because its so damn awesome!
I really love the way, you wrote the story. Although in the first chapter isn't that much description, like in chapter 2 and 3, I was always able to see Sagurus face right in front of me, when he was reading Kaitos text messages and when he wrote his (and he always was so cute o_o).
And Kaito was just adorable, when he was acting like a teenage girl in love. xDD
And I really LOVE it, when Saguru calls Kaito "dove"! Thats so...aaaaaaw! xD Do you mind, when I use that nickname in one of my storys too? Its such a...fitting name and it was just..dunno how to say that...it was just filled with love, when Saguru called him that way. You know, what I mean? :3
So...to cut long story short...I just love your story and keep writing such wonderful things please! 3

Greetings from germany,
Weasel :3

PS: Sorry for my bad English... xDDD

Great chapter to end it with. I look forward to your next projects and to the rest of your other ones that are sill in progress!

This was amazing! I loved it sooo sweet!

"That guy lived and breathed drama, anything less would have been an insult to his memory." Ah, so epic. It was a fitting end for Kaito KID! Great job with that Kara-san. It was better than I expected!

I'm kind of sad to see this story end though. It was so cute. :)

I've neve had a chapter dedicated to me before! Sweet!

Sorry for forgetting to review the previous chapter. I liked that there was parental conflict but still a happy ending. Too often in fanfic it's like they live in a magical world where the couples automatically accepted, very much unlike reality.

I really liked the clash of classes in this chapter, and Kaito's uncertainties.

Also I love mama Hakuba. The canon moms of DCMK are so awesome, so I imagine Hakuba's would be too.

Fantastic as always!

Freaking out, that's just so Kaito! Oh wow, I just love this chapter! Especially all the little details about what museums they visited and the chocolate names. Just amazing!

Also, sorry read your last chapter and I was just about to review when the alarm rang for me to leave.. I kept telling myself that I had to review all day... then I forgot. Sorry!

I loved the last chapter, it was pretty realistic on what Mr. Hakuba would do probably. I mean him seeing all that and then slowly deciding. "Huh, this is okay." It was a great chapter. Especially the part about the nurse costume... lol

I've got to say, the lovemaking bit doesn't intrest me as much either. It's fun to read once in a while but the drama and developement is so much better!

Ack, that was long.

Hey! )

*cyber-hugs-you-tightly* Thanks a lot! D

I'd have never imagined my request to get such a lovely long chapter; nor that it would come so soon! Oh joy. *_*

Well what else can I say except 'I love it'? A lot actually. I hadn't expected the trigger of the meeting to be that dramatic and all, but now that I think about it I probably should have. The drama fits perfectly with the rest of the story and with Kaito's pessimistic behaviour in chapter 2 and 3.

I also liked that they had to kind of 'fight' for being accepted. In male x male relationships in fanfics the couples are often just accepted without facing any difficulties, although there exist rather strong prejudices in real life. I liked that whole Hakuba-Hakuba senior interaction a lot. How Hakuba outright told him he was a worthless parent - my imagintion of Hakuba seniors face after that statement was very vivid. ;)

H. seniors thoughtprocess concerning their relationship was well traceable too: 'His son smiled. SMILED. Saguru never smiled.' and how he didn't know where they kept the glasses and so on. Also he should know better than to listen in on the conversations of teenage-lovebirds. *gg* Serves him right!

Again thanks for posting (and writing)! :D Im curious about the next chapter(s?) so please keep the good work up! )

Saia

P.S.: Thanks for teaching me the word pedigree. I'd only known it from dog-food-ads and thought it was some kind of fictional word like whiskas. Stupid me! .

So cute! I'd love to see more about the trip to France or a 'this many years in the future type chapter.'

Not sure if normal teenage boys would ever behave like these two, but then they aren't anywhere near normal :P

Hey! )

Unfortunately I have to go to bed now, so this will be shorter than the story would deserve.

I like the way you completely seperated the point of views in chapters 1-3. Usually even if an author chooses 1 point, you still get to know what the others are doing, thinking, saying. It was interesting to only see the dialogues alone. It was also good that you left out most of the conversations though I needed to go back to Hakuba's chapter to reread the important ones (might merely be my bad memory though). The emotions were well written as well, especially in Kaito's chapters. I know this isn't really news to you, but I really like it because it's constantly like that. )

The Les Miserables introduction at the beginning was very helpful. I haven't actually seen the movie (yet!) and it was just the right amount of information to be able to follow the conversation. I probably didn't get all hints, but I didn't face any understanding problems. . b

Now to the originaly point why I decided to write before bed: Are you serious about the trip to Paris after June 21st? And about Kaito actually agreeing to that? Because last I remember they confessed on February 14th, then Hakuba arrived 2 days later. If I count in Kaito's character I doubt that the first date is more than a week after that (probably only 1 day later). So it's still February (quite light clothing choice as well, but then again, warm winters exist), 23rd at maximum and Kaito agrees to wait 4(!) months for their first time in Paris? That's ...unusual... ó.ò

And now that I'm already at it: I'd really like to see the reaction of Hakuba's parents when they get to know about/meet Kaito. As they are living apart, one of them would be fine as well...though I'll be happy with whatever omake you write anyways...heh.

Keep the good work up and thanks for posting!

Saia

P.S.: I'm still soooo~ fond of the pigtails emoticon...

P.P.S.: There do exist people who are like that at the age of 17. Though I personally wasn't, there were plenty examples in my class at school.

P.P.P.S.: Weren't Hakuba and Kaito (at least technically) together in the Sunset Manor Case? It's not a heist, but maybe a small consolation. He should definitely do it more often though. /

Stop, you're torturing me! It's not fair... Hakuba is sooo not going to last 2 months! I'd like to see him lst 2 days..

"At the very, absolute least you have to wait one week, Saguru! Get your head out of your pants!" I like Hakuba's little comments!

I can't wait for the next chapter! :)