Reviews for Revelations of One Harry James Potter
gabzep chapter 15 . 7/30
Seriously Daphne too? Come on! Oh well.

I have to admit I feel bad for Luna I think she got a raw deal.
gabzep chapter 14 . 7/30
You know I think the 4 betrayers thought that since he said ‘Apology accepted‘ things were going to go back to they why the where. They must have forgotten that he is ruthless Lord Potter not clueless Harry Potter.
gabzep chapter 13 . 7/30
Well at least Neville has Hannah and as long as they stick together with Luna and Hermione they should be fine. I mean they messed up lost a good friend but they are still young and seriously friends grow apart.

Just keep your heads down guys hehe.
gabzep chapter 12 . 7/30
I’m glad he has Amelia and Susan to help with the politics. How can he make positive changes if he’s not leading the charge.
gabzep chapter 11 . 7/30
What in the world possessed those fools to hide in Grimmauld place basement? He took it easy on Tonks and made it quick. I guess since Remus has been betraying him and his family longer he has to suffer more.

Bye Tonks & Remus!
gabzep chapter 9 . 7/30
Well f**k talk about a drama packed chapter!

Seriously tho how can they not win when you have family magic, ancient magic, love based magic and mother magic on their side.

Sorry Hermione no more Harry Potter for you.
gabzep chapter 8 . 7/29
You know Harry’s mom was scary smart, I just can’t believe she didn’t come up with a way to save herself and James with some ritual. It’s almost like she’s some kinda seer or something.

You should write an AU where Lily with James help said f**k the prophecy and save the Wizarding World while ruining their enemies the way Harry is doing here.
gabzep chapter 7 . 7/29
Well that was a bit harsh but since family magic requires It, Harry had no other choice but to kill off Ginny!

I’m lost on what to think of Hermione. If she HAD to willingly become Ron sex slave then he owns her and was able to share her with others why is Harry helping her. I get it that he saw her as a sister but tricking her isn’t willingly. It’s like the death eaters claiming the Imperius was used for the dark mark.
Aratherfluffyfatcat chapter 15 . 7/26
Enjoyed the story thanks
Teenie chapter 15 . 7/15
First, I'd like to apologize for not having an account so you cannot reply if you wish to. I simply hate having accounts and trying to remember logins especially when I rarely review stories.

Second, Hermione was raped. Repeatedly.
Yes I understand she had to be willing to undergo the ritual but without further information on it and just how knowledgable she had to be upon entering it along with her mental state, how could it be justified to give her such treatment? You imply a few times that her weaknesses were exploited in order to convince her- what weaknesses and how were the exploited?
She was 14-15 when this happened (possibly younger as I don't recall you explicitly stating an exact time). So a young teenager who was coerced by Dumbledore, the so called hero of the light was subjected to sexual slavery without any option to run and she was torn down not just by her 'brother' but her parents?
I don't care what Harry fought off (potions, spells, etc) he never was put through a ritual where the victim was himself, so who is to say how he would have reacted. Even then, you talk of how he is so powerful and his magic is rooted differently than the average magical so whose to say any could fight like he has?

The rest of the story, while not absolutely mindblowing, is good, yes. But the fact you have the two main characters crucify a RAPE VICTIM for being COERCED into becoming a sexual slave?
That is downright disgusting. I am honestly shocked that there are not more reviews condemning this.

This story should to contain warnings that it deals not only with sexual slavery and rape but that it normalizes victim blaming which is utterly unacceptable in the real world.
I'm not saying a story cannot contain the above things but at the very least, have the decency to put in warnings.
Paul Waltz chapter 15 . 7/6
I just wanted to say that I have read all of your longer multi chapter stories and have truly enjoyed every one . They are a breath of fresh air for me and the humor was wonderful. Thank You for all of them .
Xtrafar76 chapter 11 . 5/27
Reminds me of Michael Corleone in The Godfather
Bt chapter 2 . 5/26
I like it I always thought Dumbledore was a prick
Guest chapter 15 . 5/23
Beautiful! Amazingly beautiful! I like the FEROCIOUS Harry!
Ipswichian chapter 1 . 4/28
Ensure. Secure or guarantee
Insure. Protect against loss

Entertaining story. Writer needs to use the words “ensure” and “insure” correctly as above.
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