Lol that made me laugh. That description of the surprise and how that apple juice kinda flew everywhere had me laughing so hard. I think you characterized them really well :) Also, I think it's probably better without the smut XD;;

Continue this goddammit.

Dirk is so silly. :3 Dave is even sillier though. It was a well written, innocent, fanfiction. There were only a few grammar mistakes, so don't worry about it. :)

lol, i think this is fluffy in their own way. x3 i liked how this didn't have any plot whatsoever. so cute. ;D

Gosh, ru-ude.

I would've thought they wouldn't be so outright angry. Specially cuz it's more ironic that they wouldn't be or something.