| Reviews for The Revenge of a General |
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  Guest chapter 8 . 4/1 This shit is Percabeth? I’m out. |
| Jack golden chapter 3 . 3/28 The bit involving Thalia, Percy and the moon lace doesn’t work. They pick Bianca and nico up in book three Percy Jackson and the titans curse but he meets calypso in book four Percy Jackson and the battle of the labyrinth. Also Percy doesn’t even know about Annabeth liking him he just know he likes her cause the first time they had any thing involving romance was in book four Percy Jackson and the battle of the labyrinth where Annabeth kisses Percy before he blows up mount saint helens. Other than that great book I really like the plot |
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/24 Chaos is a woman |
| Doctor Lobotomy chapter 2 . 3/11 (Talking to a captured Poseidon while holding a hammer) You know, this is a tool. Tools are meant to be used to fix things. Well, guess what? Now I'm gonna fix you. I'm gonna start hitting you now. I'm not sure when I'll stop. |
| CatLuver chapter 1 . 3/4 POSEIDON WHAT THE FUCK |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/25/2019 Jesus, whoever this guest guy is, you should lay off, I mean it’s just a fanfic. You shouldn’t cyber bully someone just because the aren’t writing what you wanted |
 IAmAether chapter 10 . 8/15/2019 So sorry for doubting you |
| Keith chapter 4 . 7/31/2019 I feel like real thals would say "FUCK YA BITCH!" |
| Guest chapter 29 . 7/27/2019 You are a liar. Nobody means anything to you or you would actually have done something. Your words are empty and in this case nonexistent. Your actions, or lack thereof prove your lies. You are a leech. |
| Guest chapter 22 . 7/27/2019 How fucking pathetic. You have to use a chapter to solicit birthday wishes. How sad and lonely you must be. Especially if one has zero talent. |
| Guest chapter 20 . 7/27/2019 Pathetic. You have almost more Notes then story. How sad you are little writer. |
| Guest chapter 19 . 7/27/2019 Your writing talent is nonexistent. Any fans you have are delusional people who like trash. |
| Guest chapter 17 . 7/27/2019 Fucking idiotic moron. Skimmed the chapter, it wasn’t worth reading. |
| Guest chapter 13 . 7/27/2019 Wow what a waste a useless fucking chapter. Useless. Useless. Useless. Useless. Useless. Why don’t dumbass writers delete this garbage when they update? Oh maybe it’s because they are too stupid and/or lazy to do so. |
| Guest chapter 9 . 7/27/2019 No. Authors don’t deserve faith when they cause the bullshit in the first place. If you don’t like the flames, do t make such retarded fucking plot decisions. Your stupidity earned you the flames so suck it up little bitch. |
