This story was an awesome read! Your writing is super vivid and the story is incredibly interesting. The relationship between Kurogane and Fai is written perfectly. 17/10

You did so well to make me trip and stutter through this story. It's so beautifully written and the plot twists are enormous and so well done. I honestly thought that Ashura was the one who was sealed for a moment there! I was frankly stunned and thrilled at the same time to see Fai as a god, and Kurogane and his chill nature about it all just made everything so worth it for me. I also adore how there's only the simplest amounts of fluff in this story, and that it hints at more as time winds on. I love this story so much and is be thrilled to see what happened afterwarda, but for now I am pleased and contented with the ending. Thank you so much for writing this.

that was very intriquing and detailed story.
I loved all the little details in there that made this more than just a run-in-the-mill fic.
it was really well done and I read it non stop. it was capturing.
:D

This has to be one of the most attention-catching stories I've ever read. It was well thought of, well written, and over all, amazing.

Very nice story! Interesting plot, nice character usage! It work! Nice job!

THIS IS AMAZING!

THIS WAS SO AMAZING I haven't even seen nor read Tsubasa, but this was recommended to me and I love it to death! The detail made me feel as if I was there, and the story was one of a kind and phenomenal! This will be one of my favorite stories, thank you for bringing it into existence! :D

This. This is the best fanfiction I have ever read in this fandom, and I'm almost willing to say it's the best one I've read period. Fai and Kurogane are perfectly in-character, you fit in so many complex story elements into a new setting flawlessly, and I have absolutely no complaint. It's very rare for me to be so totally satisfied with anything that I wouldn't want to change a thing, but that's the feeling this piece left me with. Yes, it's a piece, not just a fic. You have transcended the word "fic". Thank you for writing this, and please write something for this pairing again soon if you're still in the fandom.

WOW! This is story is just amazing! I love it!

That was amazing! I absolutely loved it :D I couldn't stop myself from reading, the ending was really nice and you have a great way with words (unlike me). Anyway you did an awesome job and I look forward to reading more of them, keep up the good work!

The scene where the palace turned from day to night was mesmerizing. I started tearing up when Ashura was talking to Fai; it seemed so corny and cheesy, but I couldn't actually think of another instance of it to be considered cliche. I guess that just means it's good enough that it COULD be a cliche. Hmm.

Thanks for writing!

Awwww super cute ending! That was an amazing story! Well done, really well done. It's interesting to see Sakura turn into Tomoyo when the time changes. So the price of reviving a god meant death, not full Seth, but death where the cut was made.

Good story Klitch _

This fic is totally awesome. Although I somehow already can predict what Fai is, but this story is just that awesome that I even can hold myself to read something 20k words-long in one night. I love your writing style, I love how you wrote the story about the wind god and the dragon, and I love how you use the canon-part in this story and it's totally worked. Great. More AU like this, and I'll be in seventh heaven.

Keep writing :)

I really enjoyed this story and I think your idea is very original , I love everything about mythology so the whole gods and goddesses concept made me super though it's super long I managed to read it in one sitting.I was late for my class but it was totally worth a great day/afternoon/evening.