Reviews for Loyalty |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh So nobodies the good guys here Perfect, I do like a bit of spice |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh dear |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooft |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah yes this story appears to have exactly what I need Thank you |
![]() ![]() This fic is absolutely fantastic. The tale u spun is so captivating and extraordinary. Ur creativity is amazing. I am totally ur fan. |
![]() ![]() ![]() cornered by an experienced hunter XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() wasn't' expecting that |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is pretty interesting |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's funny how the past had such a huge affect on the present... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder what Ash will find... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a fascinating ending. Too bad the story has to end so soon. Great job as usual and look forward for more of stories in the near future. Tanya Adams 64 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Intriguing. Thank you for the entertainment. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a satisfying ending, though I don;t think that last part needed to be labeled the epilogue, though it was separated by time from the rest of the chapters events. I like that fact that things start out mystical, but then the spirits all turn out to be pokemon, that was a nice twist. Also, since the ocean spirit was lugia, this thing did have something to do with legendary pokemon after all, I also like the idea of the vengeful spirits being absorbed by spiritomb and slowly passing on over time. The last comment from Ash (about Brock's sculptures of Lily) was a nice lighthearted way to end the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great conclision! It does leave me wanting more (as its left open) but I suppose thats the nature of the story hey ;)! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'll go man watching! Hahah Pixel is awesome! :D! |