| Reviews for Something Dark This Way Comes |
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  Guest chapter 13 . 7/26 First is dead, that set it on the crap list. Second it has good parts and bad ones like the crap you throw in to rose. But overall it was good |
 Ptolemys pyjamas chapter 3 . 7/7 Lmao! Doing illegal blood magic in an unsecured public location. Brilliant. |
| Guest chapter 13 . 6/10 Great story. Please continue. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 3/14 It makes the entire reading experience better if you imagine him acting like L or Near from death note . |
| Tenjo chapter 9 . 10/22/2019 You said it gets darker in this chapter, but the only ‘darkness’ I see is pure idiocy. You’re not going to explain how someone got into the manor despite the protections and the fidelius? You’re not going to give any reason as to how a portkey even worked while in the manor? You’re not going to explain why, of all places they portkeyed to a battlefield? You’re not going to explain why they bothered to portkey her away if the goal was to kill her immediately? None of it adds up and it seems like you just wanted to add some ‘spice’ to the story, the useless thingslike consistency or reason be damned. It’s sad because I was enjoying this so far. |
| Tenjo chapter 7 . 10/22/2019 I’unno man. I get the desire to act how he did to Rose’s bitchy cousin, but I can’t see the rest of their family just letting it slide. He also said numerous things that would’ve made the entire night bloody awkward and tense, which were inexplicably ignored. |
| Lily chapter 1 . 4/22/2019 Oh why did you need to ruin such an amazing paring as Harry and Tonks with Hermione? Anyway good fic so far |
| Coolkrobird chapter 9 . 4/15/2019 Rose's injuries in my opinion are still not as bad as the description of the picture of Cinder(aka Selene)when she was three years old and burned... Read Lunar Chronicles to find out what I'm talking about. Still pretty horrific though... LOVE THIS STORY! |
| Mark Sinfield chapter 13 . 4/13/2019 I know its been some time since you did this but any chance you could carry on as it is a good story |
| Trey of the rebellion chapter 13 . 2/4/2019 I had forgotten how much I loved this story |
| Harrison Aldrich Emrys chapter 2 . 1/16/2019 So i think i understand what you mean by dark not evil. He can still feel compassion for others and want to help good people, but he isn't hesitant to kill or torture bad ones. |
| Ciarle chapter 13 . 12/29/2018 This is an awesome story, well written and planned out. I really hope you come back to write more on this. |
| bren chapter 13 . 10/31/2018 this story don't go any further i see, still i even without a retun reply i am curious... If his other time-line was like the real deal, what did Ron do besides wrong doings he has done? But i am more curious about Hermione it's hardly mentioned what could be so bad that there great friendship is destroyed? |
| Joe chapter 13 . 8/23/2018 A truly epic read, enjoyed every minute! MUST HAVE MORE! |
| jadeangel099 chapter 1 . 4/27/2018 inchesfeet 5" 7' 7 feet and 5 inches Harry is a giant in his old age! |
