Reviews for Clumsy
Paul Lenzen chapter 3 . 1/15
It's cute.

It's a great story.

Good job.
KatarlizRose chapter 3 . 5/31/2019
Owo i love it! This story is full of love, sadness and my heart was pum pum! In every chapeter.
Guest chapter 3 . 9/24/2018
I loved the story, but I think Naruto should have made Sasuke work for her forgiveness for all the shit he put her through.
BloodPokemon101 chapter 3 . 9/2/2018
Nice job! Awesome, loved it! The only problem I have is Naruto. On one hand, I feel sorry for her. Suffering heartbreak is not easy. But on the other hand, I find her a pathetic, selfish, hypocrite. So much so, that I couldn't give two shits about her pain anymore. What lead me the most of calling her pathetic and selfish is that SHE WAS THE ONE WHO TOOK ADVANTAGE OF SASUKE'S BREAKUP WITH SARA UNDER THE PRETENSE OF HELPING HER BEST FRIEND/CRUSH, BUT IT WAS REALLY FOR HER OWN SELFISH BENEFIT. THEN SHE HAS THE NERVE TO BLAME HIM FOR HER POOR CHOICES WHEN SHE WAS THE ONE WHO PRACTICALLY SEDUCED AND 'FORCED' HIM INTO THAT SEXUAL RELATIONSHIP! Gah! Naruto is just a pathetic and a part of me have no sympathy for her.

But still I enjoyed the drama of the story! So nice job!
im.on.firee chapter 3 . 6/4/2018
damn, this story made me feel things... Honestly... my eyes are wet and my heart hurts. this was absolutely amazing, there were times that it hurt so much, i almost stopped reading but ugh wow this story is just so wonderful
yukiruhina23 chapter 3 . 4/19/2018
THIS FIC HURT ME PREETY BADLY

STRAIGHT TO THE FEELS, MAN

RELATE TO NARUTO FOR BEING A STUPID LOVER YEAAAH

FIC WELL DONE 3
Seja chapter 3 . 3/26/2018
This was amazing. Thanks
AlyssaOtaku69 chapter 3 . 12/5/2017
That was a good fucking story. I... don't even know what to say to what I read I thought it was amazing. In my opinion with the way Sasuke fell for her I think if Naruto would have inserted herself from the beginning before Sara even came around I think they would have got together and been happy from jump because they seemed like they had chemistry right from the start. I think the sex just opened his eyes to her. I wish I could have read what Sasuke said to Sara about wanting to get back together again. It would have been amusing to see him reject her.
Trula chapter 3 . 7/22/2017
Great three chapters!
FlowerPower chapter 1 . 7/22/2017
;)!
kedig82 chapter 3 . 3/17/2017
It's such a beautiful story. I kept reading this again and again. I hope you'd write more stories as beautiful as this one. The open ending for me was perfect, though I'd like to ask if you'd write a sequel for this one?
lawlu4 chapter 3 . 1/13/2017
Wow.. finally happy ending.. it was great..
XD
fangirldisaster chapter 2 . 7/30/2016
Oh my fucking gosh i cannot put into words how much i LOVE this story, this is the second time i read it and the end has me crying even harder that the first time I read it. I love how naruto doesn't want sasuke to know what happened with her all those years he was with Sara, and how Karin cares so much about naruto. Also, the plot alone is so good and you're an amazing writer, i mean, how you put these phrases between cuts was so good. I just loved it.
Also this story has a funny history with me, the first time I read it that was like at January of this year i forgot to save it as favorites, and all time since them I remembered this story as 'The One Where Naruto Was A Troubled Girl And Loved Sasuke, But He Was With Someone Else' and today I happened to scroll through the community of fem!naru pics and saw this one, then I started reading it and Gosh! it was that fic! I'm so happy that i found it.
Well, thank you again for writing this hell of an amazing story
bye

P.D: this review is on Ch2 bc it seems that I already reviewed Ch3 the first time I read it, lol
Guest chapter 3 . 7/27/2016
Lovely chapter! I really enjoyed it! :)
ougley chapter 3 . 5/27/2016
finally ( teenagers :D ) should have said that from the start
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