Holy snaps! Words do not describe how much I wish this was in the actual show.

Great insight!

People alweys give good old (young) Keith a dark background and I LOVE IT for some sick reason. Loved that he got a darker side of his power that his affrey of using. Go go jack for ackely doing something! Showing us the dark side of sky high! I wanna read a long fic about it. But think it would be hard to write

Wow, I really like the dark side of Keith you wrote. I guess he probably could do that. That would pretty much be the strongest power XD

It was also nice to see that Jake really cared about Kriem.

Great story! :D

Very interesting premise. I really liked the idea of Sky High's true power, being able to manipulate oxygen. It's like this darker side of him that Jake forces out, and how Sky High starts to tear up because it. It's a very desperate situation and it really underscores both personalities of the characters.

The other thing I liked is how you hint at the psychic violence Jake is inflicting on Sky High, the mental torture as opposed to the physical, painful torture, and how even Jake has a hard time trying to tune it out.

Very nice work again. I look forward to reading more!

Dark and chillingly graphic. Nicely done.

Howdy. It's me again. I'm always intrigued by ur new Sky High's fic, but this one is kinda disturbing. To me nonetheless. The torture and the pain, whew. It's too much. But I love how you explore the hidden potential of the limitless air. And the sense of hero within Keith. He's better die despite kill a villains. You always gave an insight into Keith, and I do love it because we got almost nothing from the anime beside Keith is an air-head and kinda dimwitted hero. I do love u for that.

Honestly, I didn't pay any attention to Jake n hir girlfriend. I'm curious to what will Sky High do in the situation.

There are some mistypo, but oh it's allright. It happen. I wish you write moarr Keith, and how series sounds about? If it's about our noble Sky High I definitely rooting with u.

Thats for now, stay well.

Crow, signed out.

Ps: I've written T&B fic in English and hoping for an opinion about the adorable pairing. Mind to check it? Tell me what do u think, ok? Of course if u have time. It's titled Two Colors. Thx in adv.