Interesting... I feel like I read some of your stuff. I liked the redo fic aspect and the controlled curse, but I’m not sure if I liked the changes to the curses

Please keep going

I really like this story and am very happy that you have put up a new chapter after such a long time. I have to say The actual manga would have turned out a lot differently if Akane, Shampoo and Ukyo had chosen to be friends with each other and were all able to eventually be married to Ranma it would have solved many of the jealousy issues. Not only that but Ranma would have been hit a lot less as well because they would be working together instead of fighting each other the entire time. Good job on this story so far and keep it up.

Your stories are pretty good so far.
But there is one thing I don't understand. Why is Akane hair still long when it's supposed to be short. To me she looks better with short hair, but that is your decision. You are the writer so whether she has long hair or short hair Ranma will still like her. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.

Is it Mousse or Razor?

Awesome. I'm so sorry it took me so long to get back to this, but I am DEFINITELY still following it and interested. Thank you for all your hard work!

Oooohh! What a cliffhanger!

Remember what I said about remembering every detail? Yeah, you can forget about that now.

What an unexpected twist you made here!

HAHAHAHAHAH! Finally! I have ALWAYS wanted Kodachi to get humiliated in the same or similar fashion as those she inflicts. This was like a dream come true!

Heheheheheh, yeah, as much as I dislike Ryoga's attitude, he is the butt of some pretty inventive lost jokes. Although, sometimes, the best joke is the simplest one. "Where's the front door?"! Oh, yeah, that DEFINITELY had me chuckling! :)

While I know it's not intentional, you're doing something in this story that many, MANY other people do in many other stories that feature time travel to some extent. That being that the characters involved with the time travel (whether actual travel or just visions) can remember and recall even the most minute of details from the most obscure and forgettable times/stories that exist. Case in point: Ryoga's arrival and vendetta against Ranma. Sure, she could/should know most of the overall details like why he's after Ranma and that Ranma almost always wins, but she shouldn't really be able to predict his every move perfectly. Things get lost in translation/memory inevitably, that's just how the human mind works. But most authors seem to forget that detail, ironic eh?

That little petpeeve of mine aside, it's definitely nice to see a somewhat more open-minded and grounded Akane than in canon. Granted, I think you might be making her a little TOO understanding of Ranma and his habits. As loathe as I am to defend canon!Akane, there were a LOT of times where her anger at him was actually somewhat justifiable because Ranma wasn't thinking things through (if at all).

Okay, next chapter!

Heh, you know, you're probably one of the few that I know of who have captured what a self-centered, greedy bitch Nabiki is. That's one of her biggest problems in canon: she got away with EVERYTHING and NEVER! ONCE! had to deal with the consequences! That is why she is one of the characters I most despise...in ANY story, series, or anything! Right up there with Delores Umbridge (and that's saying something)!

Heheheheh, a little cheesy and corny, but it's definitely a different take on the series. I'm glad I decided to start reading this story. Let's see what comes next!

Atualize a história Update He Will be Me

Good five chapters