Reviews for Gluttony |
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Utena-Puchiko-nyu chapter 1 . 7/29/2009 I love this. Kisses from Argentina! |
Squibakou chapter 1 . 7/12/2007 A beautiful expression of these characters, fantastic. |
evil-mastermind666 chapter 1 . 4/12/2007 SQUEE! I love Ron-Draco. |
E chapter 1 . 8/18/2006 Absolutely lovely. I love the whole gluttony angle! And the last line made me really happy because you didn't end the sentence in a preposition. D |
Teraki WuFang chapter 1 . 9/25/2003 I love it, short and sweet...like you! -love Teraki |
cara macree chapter 1 . 4/17/2003 Wow! At first because I didn't read the pairing, I thought it was Ron/Harry. But Ron/Draco is definitely "better than chocolate" _ |
MamaLaz chapter 1 . 7/24/2002 LOL! I was just going through Sophie's list and like totally agree... Nice how I make her do all the work and just refer to hers isn't it? ;) What are wives for! :) I do adore this! I was really taken aback when I first read this because I was surprised at how brilliant it was. I mean, this definitely stands out and I was so chuffed that it was R/D to boot! I love how you explained how Ron grew up, always being a glutton. And I adored how much he expressed his hate for Draco though we all knew he would melt when he came near... Sigh... how can anyone doubt they make a lovely couple? Man, I really did take my time reviewing this didn't I? *hits self over head with frying pan* Bad Tas! xxxTasyxxx |
InTheVast chapter 1 . 7/18/2002 wow, this is really well written. *off to read the sequel* |
Deezley chapter 1 . 6/12/2002 Oh wow, this is really amazing. I actully heard about this story on SS Prince and Pauper, and I finally came to read it. I'm so glad I did, this is really wonderful. I'm going to go read the next one now, but I really liked this. (Sorry I'm a terrible reviewer) XOXOXO Dee |
Nerd chapter 1 . 6/11/2002 Brilliant! Brilliant, brilliant! Thanks for writing this. :) |
cattail prophetess chapter 1 . 6/6/2002 Yay, you wrote R/D. *And* you got linked to at the S. And Pauper. Go you. ::the anti-reviewer shudders:: Erm, I like this. It's pretty. I like the surname thingy, and the obsession thingy, and... ::beams:: Well, it's just *pretty*! |
Jaime chapter 1 . 6/5/2002 Whoa. There are no words for this. It's absolutely amazing, but that's not strong enough a word. ;) I'm serious, I'm completely speechless. Sitting here chanting 'damn.' over and over in awe. I know I sound like a freak now, but.. damn. ::snicker:: I loved this. I would have copied some favourite lines, but there were too many. Wow. |
SophieB chapter 1 . 6/4/2002 Oh yay! Have you changed ships or did you do this on a lark? I love Ron and Draco, and I love this story. It's got presence. And you've taken a characteristic of Ron and expanded on it. I love that. Have you ever read a story by Penelope-Z called "My Morpheus" I think. Though that one is H/D this reminds me of it for some reason. I love the paragraph that begins, "The most famous boy in the world had chosen me as his friend - not just grown gradually closer to me, but actively *chosen* me." It was very well put, and what I think Ron really does feel. More favourites: "I have never been able to tell when I've had enough of something." "Sound: voice lowered with heat, moaning my name (surname, usually, but sometimes he slips)." "Touch . . . always touch. Touch the one I really can't seem to get my fill of." especially coupled with the very first sentence of the story. "'Draco,' I whisper onto his skin, so quietly that it might have been just a thought." "For us, using first names is akin to expressing our undying love." "It's getting harder to forget this when we're not touching, to forget exactly how it feels. How it's better than chocolate, better than Quidditch, better than laughing with my friends. Here's a frightening thought: perhaps this is the one obsession from which I won't recover." Well shit. That was pretty much the whole story, wasn't it. Suffice to say, I liked it. :D |
cosmoz chapter 1 . 6/4/2002 oh, i have read this before, its really good, you should make an on going story with these plots...Ron and Draco 4eva! |
Azzie chapter 1 . 5/31/2002 Awww...This was so sweet! Draco as Ron's obsession. Very adorable. *grins* |