John's internal drunk thoughts are the best thing and I choked on my Pepsi reading them. It came out my nose.

"Looked down a time little hammer of Egbert" I literally choked on water because of this

Is this over?

Please update soon!
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Write more pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaasaase

an amazing story. fell in love with it. hope there is more to come.

pleas please please continue this been over a year yet I still check to see if it updates

I'm also curious to what happens next :) this is a cool AU that's well thought out and super fun! Can't wait for next update ;33

Ahhhh this was really great! Thanks for putting so much hard work into writing this, it was really well written and had one of the best plots I've read in a while!

omg please update this is so good

Just curious, are you going to continue the story now that Homestuck has started back up? :D

That was an amazing story. I really enjoyed it. I hope it doesn't end there. I hope you will continue it.

This story is amazig and incubus Dave is so adorable and I just really love this dynamic. I was wondering if you were going to continue this story? It's amazing and one of my favourites :)

OMG, I loved how you made that dream of John's about canon Homestuck. That was sooo cool! And Vriska being introduced was cool too. I wonder if she's a demon too or if the smell of blood on her was really just from working at a butcher's shop. Either way would be cool. Wouldn't that surprise John to learn that his two friends are both demons? Hahaha!
Loved how you wrote this chapter! Keep up the great work!

LOVE it :3