Very well written, I enjoyed your little story.

That was so awesome. I love the characterization and the way you interpreted the battles, the junctioning, and Renzokuken, of course! I loved it.

It's official, I'm so totally in

I agree with whomever complimented you on your description of GF summoning. People generally treat it so casually in their fics, but if you think about it... it's a really bizarre and disturbing process.

Loved the renzokuken explantion and loved the chilly and amused interaction between Quistis and Squall. Wish there were more stories like this...

that was . . . beautiful! i loved it! :) :) :) you are such a good writer, you MUST write more! i mean, you write the GF summoning details brilliantly! i;ve only come across maybe one or two other authors who treat summoning with the same originality of approach(one of these stories is "Devour" or some such about the Devour command, a short but disturbing read), and yours blows them all away. great, wonderful, running out of adjectives, write more!

That was absolutely amazing! I could learn a few things from you, I'm sure. Don't be surprised if I contact you in the future . . . I loved this story. I couldn't possibly write anything like this. This was one of those untouchable pieces that makes you want to cry when you think about it, because you know that you'll never get even *close* to matching it. Keep up the good work! You're an amazing writer, and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

~ Mitsuyatsu

Wow...Very nice. I haven't seen stuff this deep in a long time. If you have anymore like this, I would love to read them

nicely done. i really like how much detail and insight you put into this. hopefully you'll continue and expand on it.

yeah, the sailormoon fic you're thinking of is Interlude, and yup, i wrote that one too. the fountain scene really sticks out, ne?

::claps:: Wonderful! :)

Oh Hyne, that was SSSSSSSSOOOOOO good! I read it two or three times! _ Is this the same person who wrote Sailormoon fanfiction? Cause if it is, yours was the first one I ever read and you got me hooked...It used the English names, but the japanese for the crystals...A lemon...REALLY good...There was a fountain .

That was very, very good. The imagry in the eye description and of the Guardian Forces is beautiful, the fight realistic, and and poetic touch...what more could you ask for?

wow, very very good story. i love the amount of detail you put into it. write some more on this story. i would love to read some more.

Whoa. THAT was good. Very...heartfelt. I liked it a lot. Dances of Death were always intresting _~