I am so glad to see this story updated! I enjoyed every word of it.
Looks like Spyro is getting a little more jealous, and Balthzar has lost track of them.
What next I wonder?
Will Malefor's previous dream come true.
Just wait and see, as the plot thickens.

YOSH! You have continued this story once more! I'M SO HAPPY! Great work too! Man was this an enjoyable read. I loved reading every word.

Anyway, what's up with Spyro? Why's he acting so...jealous when Cynder is only trying to be nice and comfort Young Malefor? After all, both have had similar experiences. So it's natural for former...outcasts for lack of better term, get along. Right? Guess Spyro doesn't see it like that huh?

Good work writing down my character too. He was perfectly written. Down to a T.

I hope to see more of this soon ok? Till next time!

Is this story discontinued as well? Since it was last updated three years ago. That's to bad, I thought it was a good idea and I check all the time to see if it is updated. But due to the date, I am starting to doubt it.

It's kind of hard to picture Malefor being good besides being pure evil in the game but it's still good.

Dragon name is Skye
Age elder
Gender male
Appearance green blue and purple. Look up Skye the
Dragon to see more
Personality unknown
Element wind

Hi I was wondering if you can please hurry up with the next chapter I love it so much thank you.

Very good so far, I hope to see more soon.

(Ill write an actual review when Im up-to-date :P)

Great chapter! Update again soon! I can't wait to read what happens next! It also seems Spyro's a little jealous of Cynder and Malefor eh?

I know you said light dragons are white with golden backgrounds, but I made mine vice-versa, if it's ok. I really would like to see her in your story and hope you like her.

Name: Firefly.

Age: Adolescent, 13.

Gender: Female.

Appearance: Golden dragoness with slightly visible melon spots down her back. White claws, chest/belly, spikes, horns, and tail tip. Tail tip is a small orb that glows under her control. Her horns are shaped like spyro's, but cured instead of pointed and smooth like cynder's. Eyes are a soft melon.

Personality: Firefly loves to look on the bright side of things and is easily forgiving. Cares for anyone and is protective, especially over her village. She likes to write songs and her favorite music is Taylor Swift, but this detail isn't needed unless you want to use it in your story. Enjoys using sarcasm. Is strong in battle and uses her light powers to temporarily blind her enemies for a battle advantage. Kind of shy.

Element: light.

Bio: Firefly is a normal light dragoness that is a great warrior. She has many friends and loves to play around. Is very imaginative and creative but serious when she needs to be. Some of her friends tease about her tail tip but she doesn't mind because she knows they're just playing around. When the war comes she trains extra hard for battle and eats healthily to stay fit. Gets plenty of rest before the war.

ADDITIONAL DETAIL: Firefly's parents are Marley(mom) and Lantern(dad). They may look however you want but they are light elements.

Shade continued
Gender: male
Personality: didn't believe in ancestors until prophesy of purple dragon came true, cynical, trickster, plays pranks on those seen as close friend or family
Gang description: group of 15-25 teenage dragons (not counting children/ eggs that are younger siblings , good street fighters, use parcour style moves, act like large family(eg play pranks, jokes, if one gets hurt all work together)

Name: Shade "ghost" darkblud
Age: Young adult
Colour: silver/platinum horns, black scales, dark purple under-belly, violet eyes( glow like purple fire when using magic or element)
Element: shadow
Bio: abandoned as a child grew up alone, assassin/mercenary for hire, outwardly none trusting and merciless but when friends is loyal and fights to the death to protect those he cares for, head of a gang of teenage assassins, spies and thieves recruited from abusive families or the street (sees them as family)

Ooh I can't wait to send in my OC! I'll send you one via PM. I have one question though, will Cynder and Malefor be forgiven for what they've done? Please PM me an answer or hint!

Hmm...interesting! By the way, I think you might have Meadow confused with Chief Prowlus. No offense.

Aww, I really feel sorry for Young Malefor! I hope he'll be able to atone for his sins...

Whoa...this chapter was incredible!