Reviews for A Bid Farewell |
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Ghostwriter chapter 1 . 2/15/2014 MMMMMMMMMMMMM...Nice and steamy. Love it. Catch ya on the flip side. |
Opalbrat chapter 1 . 5/1/2013 Loved this. :) |
shadowsongtress chapter 1 . 1/21/2013 I liked it. Sweet and nice. I would have went with him if I was Kim. |
andyg2525 chapter 1 . 5/18/2012 this fills in the gap perfectly see ya |
brankel1 chapter 1 . 5/7/2012 he comes back to her. |
arielYG chapter 1 . 5/7/2012 I think this was the first time in a while that I spent more than 2 minutes on the PR fandom. And you finally wrote it and posted it and it was wonderful! Kim was just this perfect slightly spoiled princess and you wrote her so well. And Tommy, am guessing it's not his first time, but he's so adorable. They had sex! Yes, they did. Anyway, loved it :) |
psycochick32 chapter 1 . 5/7/2012 *flails excitedly* THIS IS EVERYTHING I LOVE. AND NOTHING TO DISAPPOINT MEEEEEE :D :D :D :D "Are you going to disobey a direct order from your Princess?" she asked sweetly. - BWAHAHAHAHA Tommy is really bad at understanding. I bet he will take at least twice as long to train as a regular man! Really, it was quite unfair of Rita to make him all sexy and confident and then take that away. "I..." He hesitated. "No?" - Burst out laughing at work because I could honestly hear the not-quite-sure-kind-of-confused tone of voice xD *flails* THIS IS SO GREAT, HAVE I TOLD YOU THAT. I'm probably certain I should not be giggling at the beginning to the sex scene, but it is just fabulous and adorable and omg "please do" hahahahaa :D I like that this is realistic, and a little painful, and yet fun and great and happy and I JUST LOVE ALL OF THIS. AND NOW IT ENDS... : (Just kidding. I can't srsface at this for reals. But I couldn't let a review go without it!) |
1991-Old-school-kid chapter 1 . 5/6/2012 Great story! Glad it was finally written! |
Young at Heart21 chapter 1 . 5/6/2012 Great job. And A wonderful Sunday surprise. I loved this I found it to be really sweet and innocent like it should be. |