Nice:) i love the ending

I just found this story today! I loved it! CAN'T WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT STORY!

I love the bit you added about Mags. Pure genius, my friend :P

And I also love that you Vanessa and Michael/Natalia and Mallorin got together.

I just love this story.

I'm going to subscribe to you (as an author) so please write again soon :)

That was amazing 3.

I love chapters like these. Showing the reader what thier life is now like :) I must say I will miss reading the story :) thnkyou for writing

Again, very well written. This whole story is brilliant. I love Vanessa/Natalia too :) Well done

I loved this chapter! It was amazing to see how Mallorin/Michael handled being a Victor and the death of Amelia and Gina. I loved the end it seemed perfect :)

Very well written but... erm... what happened to Mallorin? :P

I don't... Um, understand?

Great! The deaths were so emotionless :p Gina's was a little sad though. I like the end.

I wish Amelia's death was more dramatic or that Gina killed her :p Mallorin has been killing too many people. This was a shocking turn of events and I'm looking forward to the next chapter, as always!

What an amazing chapter! I know I hadn't reviewed for a while, but I've been following along and this is truly an awesome story. Keep up the great work! Hope you can update soon! :)

I wish that the battle scene waa longer where he killed the boy but over loved it!

Aww. Hairy man died... BUUUT I have a new idea: KIWI KICK at the feast, can someone kick a kid in the balls, and then he falls off?

Soz bout the language. It's just how I pictured him! Also, can you make someone jump and smack into the building? For some reason, I find it funneh. Also, well, Can u give someone a cookie at a feast, and a lot of people go ballistic for it? :P