I understand that you don't want umbreon on Ash's team but I disagree plus 2nd generation pokedexes did not have the ability to scan pokemon and learn their moves but I did like the modern touch also I would've liked ash to get steak is and scissor basically the mega evolution Pokemon would be cool unless you wrote this before kalos

I hope you do gen 5 trade ash was offered a trade for his scraggy which he refused but what if he did trade scraggy one of her Pokemon please do it from me Jessie.

honestly the only thing that could have made it perfect if all the eeveelutions got under his possession

Good me like training

Great idea of trading.

I know about the other regions. But it's not like the other regions didn't exist. It was just that the writers hadn't come up with the Third generation onward.

What kind of idiot would trade a Dragonaire for well...anything? Keep in mind this is going by anime rules, and the Dratini evolutionary line is incredibly rare.

why not have two of the Eevee eveluchins bread so misty cod get one

OMG Y CAN U GIVE UP! IM DEFINETELY READING THE KANTO ARC NOW...

OK I know this is like way late but I gotta ask, what nimrod got rid of Raticate's OP as hell Super Fang? That is the Demi of the Pokemon world and was one of the deciding factors in my defeat of Clair in Pokemon Soul Silver. No offence but it just boggles me someone would make a Raticate forget it.

This was definitely hilarious. I especially loved Misty's going out to catch pokemon for once! (because she really doesn't get to catch many in the show, does she? Togepi was luck, Psyduck caught himself, and well I guess she got Horsea but that was all early show. After that Ash usually gets even the water types they fight over.) I found the sort of mess between the anime and some of the game mechanics interesting as well. You also wrote this in a very entertaining style. I really enjoyed this!

This is great!

I found this fanfic amusing. And that has our heroes doing some interesting trades. So I have a couple things to ask you. 1. How did you come up with the idea for the fanfic? 2. What do you suppose Misty is going to trade with Ash, for the Dragonair? 3. Besides the Lickitung for Wobbuffet accidental trade, what other trades could've been made by Team Rocket? Be sure to give me a response.

Nick Johnson

If you can include an Espeon, and have Steel typing, you could have gone for a Skarmory instead of trippling up on electricity. (Pikachu, Jolteon, and Magneton).

The only flying types you have here are Gligar and Jumpluff, and I don't really see Jumpluff fitting with Ash's team dynamic. (And he has enough Grass types throughout the show)

Great story

I have cool ideas for fanfictions based on this kind of fanfiction make mixed fanfictions based on ash's journey through hoenn with the pokemon ash required in this fanfiction and the other one and do the same with jhoto sinnoh ad unova and if someone does do the jhoto one make ash catch elekid magby ursaring murkrow and sensel