Really like it. Good grammar I think? Well no obvious mistakes, so great story.

Really cute! My only criticism is write a sequel about what happens at home, I want to know :O

Very cute! Love it!

I love the story and I think that you should totally write the confrontation between John and Sebastian. Please. Please! PLEASE! _

Quite powerful actually, one little slip up of John's and there you go! Well done.

Ta

Ah, this was a wonderful story, you really managed to capture the relationship between the two of them, just a slashier version lol. The protectivness that John showed was really wonderful to read, you managed to show how much he cares for Sherlock but also how much he sees him truthfully which was really brilliant to read.

And the more vulnerable side of Sherlock that does get hurt by peoples words was very well developed and isplayed, very good writing and setting the scene, as well as working with the canon storyline, I wanted to hit Sebastian after watching that episode!

The romance shown between the two of them was a wonderful mixture of passionate, tender and that amazing understanding and connection that they have between them. A really enjoyable well written story. Thank you so much for sharing it XD

This is very good it's sweet