Reviews for Skipping Time |
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![]() ![]() ![]() What an amazing story. Scary as hell, the ships are astounding and the situation almost as bad as it could be. Rivetting stuff indeed and you tell the tale in a way that keeps the reader engrossed. I think you do need a beta as some of the spelling and grammar is distracting, but the story is worth the effort. Look forward to the next episode immensely. |
![]() ![]() ![]() im glad that Spock is alive and awake. i hope they reach some kind of safe heaven soon so that they will be able to properly recover |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww, this was a beautiful chapter! |
![]() ![]() Very glad to see this story continue! I don't mind waiting a bit between chapters - you always deliver the heart wrenchers and it's worth the wait! |
![]() ![]() Loving this- accurate characters, enough past trauma to make things interesting... And of course my favorite couple EVER, Spock and Kirk. Oh, and of course the ever-grumpy McCoy. And the Borg concept is interesting. Also, I am slightly confused as to whether this is stepfather or Tarsus IV or both. Whichever, I very much like this and totally get the writer's block-I'll get a good idea for 20 pages on paper and then it sorta goes poof. Anyway... Great job and please keep writing! Like now! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love love love. Plz keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed reading this chapter and I can't wait to read more. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'll never get to sleep it's too good. I'm gonna die of happiness. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so intense but not depressing as some other stuff I've read. It makes me thankful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The federation is dead?! That's intense. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So what is Jim gonna do with that hand?! Lol. Oh this is great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's a shit ton of people in one spaceship. Thank god it's an awesome space vehicle. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can tell this is gonna be good. I can feel it in my bones. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay NOW I understand how Jim became unconscious and intubated for 2 weeks after just cutting his pinky. I am glad you explained and added those complications in this chapter cz initially it seemed like overkill for just losing a pinky. Good chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What happened to the Captain's hand? Hey no huge deal but you might just consider having a beta reader proof read your story for you to fix a few spelling or grammatical errors. Nothing major but just enough to be distracting from the story. A few examples; presents (shld say presence), approximant (approximate), presser (shld be pressure in ch 6). I noticed others but can't recall what they were now :-) - |