Reviews for Alchemy
Filerinizz16 chapter 7 . 8/18/2019
The thing I adore the most about this is the characterisation. It’s so amazingly good and just right? Like you’ve made up this intricate and really interesting scenario that the show wouldn’t ever touch, thrown in the characters and still had them behave in a perfectly reasonable way? Nothing is ever over the top and it’s just great to read.
DashOfPeppers chapter 7 . 6/19/2018
I go back to this story every now and then and remark upon the fact that I search this wastebasket of a site, in spite all of the junk crystalized between the corners of the door and the wall, for your stories. Because if there's one thing I would bother to sift my hands into actual dog doodoo over, it would be for something with a prose so unusual that it encapsulates me by the first word, grabs me by the hand by the second, and then leads me into a tango dance that I never prepared for but wanted all along by the third. And I'm left still spinning, still hearing the music and still feeling the sways and pulls and the musky scent of a dying story by the time the final word ends, and I'm left dizzy in the sidelines wondering how I had ever managed to find this, or if it found me.

I haven't written in many years. And I miss it. By God do I miss it. I forgot how good man can be with a pen in their hand and a world of ideas in their mind. What can I say except you inspire me? I know it's been five long years, and maybe you're back to better things, but if you haven't published a book by the time you're thirty, I will personally find you and pummel you with a broken broomstick hidden in the alley of my grandmother's old house.

By God, this was a masterpiece. Don't quit. Whatever you do, don't quit.
siriuslytired chapter 7 . 5/27/2018
THIS STORY IS ACTUAL GOLD. Honestly it's really, really good. Excuse me while I go read all of the stories on your profile in an attempt to make up for the part of me that desperately wants to know what happens next.
Thank you for all the work you've put into this gorgeous story, it's really made my week.
CrumbleCookie chapter 7 . 3/2/2018
So like, do you want to update this? This fan fic is pretty cool and totally original!
Guest chapter 7 . 5/28/2017
This story is incredibly well written and captures their voices so perfectly. Live the relationship between Harvey and Mike too. I wish you had more chapters to read!
Eniluap12 chapter 7 . 1/14/2017
Are you going to continue your story ? I really hope you will ! I soooooo like the story !
Guest chapter 1 . 12/6/2016
Hi I love your story can you tell me how to put it in my Libbary
Guest chapter 7 . 10/8/2016
Loved it! Please continue! X
Book girl fan chapter 7 . 7/31/2016
That conversation was so perfectly tuned for both of them. It's amazing how well you did it, actually, because I could practically see their expressions, especially when Louis was hastily backtracking because of course he didn't actually mean he would murder someone, no way!

Will there be more? I want to see Kyle get his just desserts!
Anna chapter 7 . 6/13/2016
Great:)! Any Chance for more?
sp72 chapter 7 . 1/26/2016
You could not seriously consider let this story unfinished. All people are stunning in-character, the interaction sweet but subtle and completely believable, the sharp banter just like in the show, you created a really interesting plot and as a bonus it is written with great skill. Please do not tell me you abandoned it.
Breakmystride chapter 7 . 1/2/2016
Your story is amazing! How you manage to keep everyone so much in the character is just fabulous! Love it really, hope you haven't abandoned this and that you really do continue it at one point. Hat down.
Guest chapter 7 . 12/8/2015
I have to know how this ends! Please continue your amazing work!
Guest chapter 7 . 8/31/2015
Just read this for millionth time, and it was great as always! I'm really hoping you'll continue this at some point :)
Mayhem21 chapter 7 . 8/24/2015
So, this is an incredibly amazing story and I know that's it's been a while since you've last updated, but please tell me that you haven't abandoned this because that would just be a crying shame. I desperately want to know what Harvey is going to do when he figures out it's Kyle. I really want to know what it was that Mike saw on the computer feed. And I just really want a satisfactory ending to what is easillly one of the best Suits stories out there. Your character interaction and dialogue is amazing and you do one of the best jobs of any author I seen of actually portraying the essence of Mike and Harvey's relationship as it is in the show; you do a good job of keeping their relationship balanced as opposed to making it too mushy, and that is one of the many things you do so very well that make your fics so enjoyable. So, I very sincerely hope it's in the cards for us that you are able to finish this story eventually, but I do understand how real life and things can get in the way. Until next time, Happy Writing ;)

~Thalia013 of Mayhem21
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