Write more soon please.

I really liked this story so far! I ant wait to read more!

Excellent

I love this story

Awww! I love your story and your characters ,plus Cullen / Amell ,the best story ever :)

I can see where some people may have a problem with your Keira: she's more human than the "Hero of Fereldan" is portrayed. I kinda figured the fic was coming from the direction of even-heroes-need-someone-to-lean-on-occasionally.

That said, I hope you continue because I'm _really_ looking forward to Cullen rescuing them and chewing them out...possibly while they're still locked in the cell (captive audience, you know).

This is amazing! I have no idea where this was hidden, because I was sure I had already combed all the amell/cullen fics here!

I really like this story, but after a while I would expect Amell to toughen up. You know 'touch me and I'll fry your ass" no matter the consequences. Also maybe she figure out why she is so fragile after mana drains and obtains more endurance. Just a thought. Can't wait to read more.

Oh for fucks sake, the Chantry and Templars aren't the devil. Find a better excuse for rape then not able to use magic because its against the rules. If thus was Kirkwall I'd understand. A girl will do anything in their power to avoid that. You just want added drama. Rape doesn't give a character depth. Then theres the 'oh poor me I'm so gorgeously beautiful its a flaw' Mary Sue cliche. I'm beautiful myself, and yeah it can get annoying, but this is overdone. I really like your Cullen and the idea of all the wardens together, but I feel you chased your readers off with such a poor heroine

Damsel in Distress Amell is getting really, very, tiring. There is no reason for her not to attempt to defend herself, the Chantry will hardly cart her to the mages prison for fending off an attack, besides shes a Grey Warden now. If you want to show the sorry plight of mages and Hero Cullen, thats fine, but do not sacrifice her character and the good sense of the story to do so. I highly suggest editing this chapter to make Amell do something other than stand there and let herself be pathetically choked and raped. Its disapointing because this was a good story so far but this is the third time this has happened and if I cant like the main character, I can't enjoy a romance story of her.

I do look forward to new chapters.

Glad to see Alistair getting some lovin! Best wishes for the new baby.

I'm not a very good reviewer, but I love your story! Cullen is one of my favorite characters and I was instantly hooked the first time I played Dragon Age. Just love how your stories play him out. I look forward to any future chapters.

Every one seems happy except for poor Alibear, he needs some love. The lovable guy he is.

I feel ridiculous because I am like a year behind on the whole DAO fandom, but I just wanted to tell you how entertaining I found both your DAO stories (spent the whole day reading them) and how I wish you had finished them! :)

Yikes! So tense! I am always happy to see this story updated. Is Morrigan feeling...something? Anything? /wink