This one shot is just perfect. I like that the ending was left open. That's part of the charm of this story.

Sup TW? I love that you are putting out a Castle fic now and then, I just love the show. It was a neat little one shot, and although Esposito was a bit too emotionally expressive for me, you nailed Lanie. I could hear her voice as I read her dialogue. I also loved the last line with the tears and raindrops- it left a sweet lasting impression. Thank you for writing TW!

Hey! Great job, but feels unfinished. You should continue it! Ly x

Nice story TW. As always. There wasn't enough dialogue though. Dialogue is always where you shine. The dialogue you did include was great though. I'm glad Lanie gave him the what for. He deserved it. I wondered throughout the episode if it was because Ryan was married that he was more cautious. I think being married makes you value your own life more.

Aww so adorable. God I love Lanie and Esposito SO MUCH. They need to be back together season 5. ALWAYS !

What? it ends there? This is such a great start. It's abrupt ending steals something from what could have been worked out with more than time for Lanie and Espo to talk. I hope you'll add second chapter.

This is really good! i hope you continue it!

This was fantastic and real. I can see this as a missing scene to Always.

Thats so sad. I lived it. I was wondering how he was going to react to all this. I know he was/is mad at Kevin but i think he was stupid for running with Kate. She has her own faults with everything. But Javier, i'm suprised he went with her. I think that he should have went along with Kevin and Castle. But it is what it is. I could say much more, but I don't want to make you mad :P

I loved reading your story:) Thanks!

This is truly beautiful. Is this a one-shot?