Reviews for Are you nervous? |
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Ami chapter 1 . 2/16/2017 C trop romantique ! |
QueenBtch101 chapter 1 . 8/18/2016 LOL |
Aremika chapter 1 . 10/5/2014 Devil: OMG! RUKA TOOK MIKAN'S VIRGINITY!? *PASSED OUT DUE TO SHOCK* |
ihavedifferentpersonalities chapter 1 . 3/16/2013 um...cool? |
rice chapter 1 . 12/28/2012 at the start natsume said "wanna play a game of would you rather" but thats incorrect since this is a story of "are you nervous?" fix that pls. |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/27/2012 ...0.o... THAT WAS AWSOME! |
AhnKiwi chapter 1 . 7/8/2012 LOL. I liked it :) and then there was that one part ._. "fap fap" ._. Yeah. It wasn't horrible to write or anything like that, but rather unfitting? The sound effect "fap fap" is usually used during well... lemons with 2 people? But it's not bad at all. Maybe you should slow it down and be a little less rushed. :) but other then that, there were no major problems. Continues writing and improving _ Ganbatte! |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2012 This is a good story. Please make some more. Mikan and Natsume forever. |
Anlanther chapter 1 . 5/11/2012 This story reminds me of another story I read in a different archive... Oh-well. This story is more in the Humor section than in the Romance one, so I think you should add that genre on. Also I think it was a bit rushed and that both Mikan and Natsume were really OOC. |
Jannith chapter 1 . 5/9/2012 Mhm...this is pretty ok the lemon was kinda rushed a bit I would say and you should warn people when there is going to be OOC (out of character) other then that I think it was pretty ok :) |