that was beautiful.

it's touched me, you're really talented.

you have just become one of my favorite authors.

Holy shit... that was deeply romantic. Draco is just wishing for harry to pull him out of a dream

Truly breathtaking. It literally left me gaping at the screen for a few minutes. Excellent characterization, dialogue, descriptions, spelling and grammar. Normally I would leave some kind of constructive criticism as well but I can’t find much wrong with this. This fic does its job of having an effect on the reader. You really know it’s a well-written story when it leaves you speechless. Cheers.

Just speechless... your story is absolutely beautiful. The pain, the ending, the innumerable lines that seem to penetrate my heart and linger there like sweet venom, such as:

'Sometimes I feared that one day, that raw wet mouth of yours would find the loose thread inside me, as it searched over my body. You would snap it with your teeth and without waking up I would break into pieces again.'

OR

'Mine were always closed, yours were always bent upwards in blind faith.'

OR

'Ten years of midnight I’ve been waiting, for you to come and touch my hair, and wake me up again.'

Etc.

You have your way with words (yet you say English is not your native language) to create such poetic scenes...

Needless to say, i'm also caught up in your 'Untold Want' fic. Which, needless to say, must be updated... I cannot wait any longer!

Wow. That's so beautiful, so creepy, so amazingly good. I loved Draco's little childish imaginings about his heart. And the way they didn't meet each other's eyes. And...well, all of it. It's incredibly impressive the amount of impact you can fit into one short ficlet. Just...Wow.

OH...my...god. I knew there were plenty of reasons to love this pairing. oen of them is fantastic prose tht it inspires.

You left me speachless. Wonderfull, bitter, haunting, gut-wrenching, perfect.

WOW. beautiful,fantastic...that was amazing

"Mine were always closed, yours were always bent upwards in blind faith."

That was, quite possibly, one of the best, most insightful and fundamentally *true* lines I've read in a fic. Lovely!

Every one fo your stories ive read i loved and this is no different!

Wow! I am in awe, I never thought that a story so short could be so amazingly good. This is simply devine.

Nicely written, if not a tad confusing. I think I've heard of that disease before though.

Penelope-Z,

The description of Draco's heart possibly being snapped by Harry after that terrible fall was painful.

The smutty bits were cool too!

Oh, this was heart-breaking. Beautifully, beautifully written. I wish I was better at analysis but all I can say is that the final line will linger with me for a long time.

Aaah..Penelope-Z, queen of the H/D angsty bittersweet R-rated monologue. You already know you're good.