A self insert is standing in front of the Senate, wearing what looks like combination crisis armor, Master Chief Halo armor it's has technology from iron Man armor and AI system in the storage system from Doom but expanded upgraded the helmet has a miniature Arc reactor it installed in it the chest plate has a miniature art has a couple of miniature Arc reactors the belt has miniature Arc reactors and one big Arc reactor as a belt buckle miniature Arc reactor has lined up on the gauntlets same thing on the boots also a black side cape also using the holographic projection technology Tony Stark has created his own omni-tool anyway so he explains to the Senate that he's a time traveler and Chrono technology we developed in the far future got rid of these psychic parasites known as the leviathans the influence on mankind is currently a very extremely low-level and it comes spikes when they expose themselves element zero element zero for all races, he further explains it acts like a carrier hub and explains how a carrier hub copy signals of transportation carry the signal to the next carrier hub until it reaches its destination, anyway, so explains element zero acts like a carrier hub but for psi that the Leviathans live in a water world with huge amount pressure in process the leviathan's call assuming direct control or it's lesser variant influencing it's the equivalent of you taking a SATs test and it's multiple choice they remove all the beneficial options and their typical MO it's leaving behind technology for races to find to study so we would follow down on Pacific technological path they can predict. They screwed up made a crazy AI that proceeded to go all Borg from startreck on them and that he's hoping to prevent humanity from dieing due to a small Gene pool by fixing things in the past so as to prevent it from happening.

Well this has definitely been a fun read. I got a rec for this, and am happy I followed up. Have to admit, when I read the title, I first thought Solar (due to the Glorious in the title and the meme) but then really looked at the title, and was expecting it to be a Infernal Shepard (Glorious Shotgun Princess, GSP aka Green Sun Prince[ss]).

This story was interesting to start off but you know how in school your English teacher would sayWrite as if your reader has no prior information and explain everything to them". This is the exact antithesis of that. It starts off quirky and interesting but then the further along it gets, the more acid the author is taking while writing. Even if you know the source material about exalted it still won't make sense and is absolutely insane. Fun first few chapters but definitely had to drop it.

*Shadow Broker merc plunges his Omni-blade into Shepard*

"I can't believe I'm asking this... But are you in yet?"

Lol.

I already read the first few chapters before, and just wanted to leave reviews. I predicted Garrusmobile.

Damn, Shepard in her SSJ Form with Albert Wesker matrix moves, makes Albert Wesker look like normal Albert Wesker.

Yeah, I agree with Shep on thermal clips, why have limited ammo when you had unlimited ammo in the first game? And did Legion think Shepard was using the thermal clip as a sex toy? Oh lord...

I also love how Legion is now called Wuffles.

There're a lot of things I like about this story. The first chapter is truly amazing, for example, and your style of writing is unlike any I have read so far. I enjoy the dialogues a lot, and the characterizations are pretty great, too.
Unfortunately, I really don't get this story. I love the idea of a superpowered Jane Shepard but the wide variety of godlike figures with their own shadowy backgrounds and lore were too much for me to make sense of. Maybe the problem is that I was looking for a Mass Effect story and instead found something that is as much an original work as it uses ME elements.
I don't mean this as negative criticism but I thought this feedback might be of some value. Maybe you should try your hand at original fiction; I've definitely read books with worse premises and your style of writing is a marvel. It just diverges too much from the original universe for my personal taste.

I liked how you made an obscure Kevin Smith reference to a Clerks Animated Series scene in Chapter 11, in reference to how it was hip to make obscure Kevin Smith references back when they were obscure. "Bear is driving," indeed. I checked the reviews, I don't think anyone commented on it being a reference (though I bet some other people noticed it).

Singing ‘Tumbling Down/Komm süßer Tod’ in Ductwork, while pulling people into said ductwork? Are you trying to bring my nightmares about bher/b back?

PS: I wonder if HTML scripting works in reviews.

need book 2

me2 shepard took over the base

Very interesting first chapter my favorite character is already waffles

10 of 10

! Loved this, even though I just started the story. Forgot how much I enjoyed Exalted fight scene cinematography. Delightful mashup/crossover. Also, Shep as Zenith? Would have assumed Dawn as default but by the various allusions seems my initial assumptions were wrong. Either way, love it. Thanks!

This is ridiculously good.

And EVEN MORE BETTER...